At the rate their going they might not even need all the Twilight's to complete Twilight. That is since they all seem to be gaining more to their personas than just their standard default.
I gotta say, this chapter pushed the envelope a little. If I remember correctly, this was rated "teen" before you punched it up to cover Anger's profanity and Morality's vulgar language. I actually liked that, since they've got the kind of language we would expect to hear from a furious, uninhibited rage-monster and someone with a cheap set of ethics.
The scene with the slaver crew, on the other hand, was a bit much. With cute, hilarious moments such as Anger and Morality's method of seeing inside the house and Creativity's chimney peril (especially when she pointed with her leg), weaving a rape and a bloody massacre into the story was pretty jarring. I'm glad they got their comeuppance, but I personally feel the rescue should have happened before Brand Hoof got started on Mute and the violence didn't have to be covered in quite that much detail. Not that I like the story less for it, no way.
I'm anticipating the next chapter because it looks like Spike and Rarity are going to be isolated together and will both vulnerable to a certain fragment that I'm still hoping exists. I feel a little bad for wanting Spike to be Lust's target while forgetting Rarity's twinge of excitement when she nuzzled Logic (even though writers who ship Rarity feel too often that Spike is inconsequential). Since Logic obviously isn't into Rarity, Lust (if she exists) will probably be more interested in her ... and hopefully Spike won't be left out. That's my theory, anyway, and I promise not to be disappointed if I'm wrong.
but I personally feel the rescue should have happened before Brand Hoof got started on Mute
I was expecting this to happen. The rape actually happening before the rescue was a lot more realistic, which I can really appreciate as it makes this fic all the more serious. Still shook me up a little, though, although knowing that the author is ready and willing to address such sensitive matters makes me all the more excited for the next chapter.
1271610 Maybe I shall. It certainly would be quite the symbolism.
1272183 They certainly did, but no. Two of them escaped Anger's merciless slaughter while her back was turned.
1272498 True, but just to be safe they gotta catch them all. We wouldn't want extra Twilights running around doing lord knows what.
1273423 It was pretty crazy wasn't it? I pulled quite the Romeo & Juliet didn't I? Unfortunately I needed something to push Anger over the edge and since Mute simply being captured wasn't enough I had to push the envelope a little. The massacre had to happen after that because well... you don't just piss off a being of rage and walk home pretty. Also it's to show yet another major part of Anger's life. When we're angry we think that nothings going right, even the simplest of things. Unfortunately for Anger it's not just a mind game, everything really does go wrong in anything she attempts to do. Don't worry though, I'm positive you'll just love the next chapter.
1274534 Sorry about the shake up but it's necessary for Anger's 'nothing ever goes right' theme. A theme that may very well tear apart everything she cares about.
1276215 Not sure if you already know already because of the newest chapter but her names Mute (defined by Anger and Morality).
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I'll begin reading this shortly, but go with 42, its the answer to life, the universe, and everything.
..........Those stallions got what they deserved. They ALL died, right?
At the rate their going they might not even need all the Twilight's to complete Twilight. That is since they all seem to be gaining more to their personas than just their standard default.
I gotta say, this chapter pushed the envelope a little. If I remember correctly, this was rated "teen" before you punched it up to cover Anger's profanity and Morality's vulgar language. I actually liked that, since they've got the kind of language we would expect to hear from a furious, uninhibited rage-monster and someone with a cheap set of ethics.
The scene with the slaver crew, on the other hand, was a bit much. With cute, hilarious moments such as Anger and Morality's method of seeing inside the house and Creativity's chimney peril (especially when she pointed with her leg), weaving a rape and a bloody massacre into the story was pretty jarring. I'm glad they got their comeuppance, but I personally feel the rescue should have happened before Brand Hoof got started on Mute and the violence didn't have to be covered in quite that much detail. Not that I like the story less for it, no way.
I'm anticipating the next chapter because it looks like Spike and Rarity are going to be isolated together and will both vulnerable to a certain fragment that I'm still hoping exists. I feel a little bad for wanting Spike to be Lust's target while forgetting Rarity's twinge of excitement when she nuzzled Logic (even though writers who ship Rarity feel too often that Spike is inconsequential). Since Logic obviously isn't into Rarity, Lust (if she exists) will probably be more interested in her ... and hopefully Spike won't be left out. That's my theory, anyway, and I promise not to be disappointed if I'm wrong.
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I was expecting this to happen. The rape actually happening before the rescue was a lot more realistic, which I can really appreciate as it makes this fic all the more serious. Still shook me up a little, though, although knowing that the author is ready and willing to address such sensitive matters makes me all the more excited for the next chapter.
1271610 Maybe I shall. It certainly would be quite the symbolism.
1272183 They certainly did, but no. Two of them escaped Anger's merciless slaughter while her back was turned.
1272498 True, but just to be safe they gotta catch them all. We wouldn't want extra Twilights running around doing lord knows what.
1273423 It was pretty crazy wasn't it? I pulled quite the Romeo & Juliet didn't I? Unfortunately I needed something to push Anger over the edge and since Mute simply being captured wasn't enough I had to push the envelope a little. The massacre had to happen after that because well... you don't just piss off a being of rage and walk home pretty. Also it's to show yet another major part of Anger's life. When we're angry we think that nothings going right, even the simplest of things. Unfortunately for Anger it's not just a mind game, everything really does go wrong in anything she attempts to do. Don't worry though, I'm positive you'll just love the next chapter.
1274534 Sorry about the shake up but it's necessary for Anger's 'nothing ever goes right' theme. A theme that may very well tear apart everything she cares about.
1276215 Not sure if you already know already because of the newest chapter but her names Mute (defined by Anger and Morality).
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Gotta catch em
Gotta catch em all
Twilightmon!