• Member Since 22nd Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen May 6th

lostdarkstellan


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a man found himself in a other world after someone kill him in military base
and realise,no matter who you are or what you are, you can have second hope.

Have a good read!

story ~stellan ~

editing ~ XeRom ~
( http://www.fimfiction.net/user/XeRom )

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 7 )

Hmm, not bad, but by no means original unfortunately. :twilightoops:

1055861

Yes i know,but is very hard to be original with all the story in this site database:twilightsheepish:

Thanks to comment!:derpytongue2:

1055937 No problem. It's not hard to be imaginative, slice-of-life fics are a good place to start :twilightsmile:

allthough intersting, my inner grammer nazi feels like its going to explode...

there are mistakes or words missing even in the description..... arwell im just gonna go and return when things are going smoothly:moustache:

1071441

not the story, you know, back up check.

and sorry for your 'exploding inner grammar nazi' , I hope you not hurt!:pinkiesad2:

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