After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.
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Fantastic story and I feel it's just beginning.
Keep at it!!
9656356
Thank you!
End of chapter nine gave me chills!
Boring? Nah whether it's filled with action or exposition you never fail to keep chapters interesting and enthralling. In fact, at least in my case, action is only a small part of why I love this. The worldbuilding, setting, and storytelling are what truly enthrall me!
9661026
Why, thank you!
Though I do understand that a story can't be made good by simply filling it with action to the brim and that people who have been sticking with Aftersound for a while know what to expect from me, I still feel a bit concerned when I write chapters like this. I almost always have difficulty with writing dialogue and on top of that the longer I work on a chapter the worse it seems to me with each day – and it took me about a month to finish this one.
9662032
Well in the case of this chapter you've done yet another stellar job! I look forward to seeing what happens with the next chapter, because things have been only getting more intriguing as the story progresses!
With all our wandering around we got a goal folks! It's time to... er… catch up with Luna I guess. If I know anything about this story it's that nothing is as simple as 1 + 1 = 2 we're seeing more 13 + 21 = 100 (It makes sense with SOME math). Compelling to the end and don't even entertain the idea that you don't write some of the most interest capturing "peaceful chapters". As awesome as high octane action is there's only so much sugar one can handle in a drink too. I enjoy reading what you write and greatly anticipate future chapters!
9664335
Thank you so much for your kind words.
And yes, things ain't even remotely simple
Aaaaaaaa
It took a bit for me to get back to this (real life is painful Dx), but I'm glad this is still amazing.
Anyway, onto the next chapter!!
9730503
Nice.
but judging by how they were positioned, it was mostly to disguise her rather than keep her warm
These coils here or those coils there.
I wasn’t given any concrete instructions, so let’s just follow
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Fixed all, thank you very much.