After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.
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Wow, more and more questions in my mind, the plot thickens as if it ain't already thicker than tank armor. Can't wait to see more!
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Thanks!
just saw the update for the third chapter. going to read it as soon as i can.
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Hope you will enjoy!
And the next chapter is going to be posted rather soon - in about a week and half.
The blog that used to host the images seems to be deleted?
9677775
Yes, unfortunately it became a victim of the Tumblr's purge. However, the illustraions aren't gone. You can find them here:
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/845454/illustrations
Or on the discord server.
Three chapters in and I'm calling it. Spoilers just in case I'm right on the money: The Crown are the changelings, who managed to defeat and replace Luna long enough to take advantage of the war against Sombra and take over both Equestria and the Crystal Empire. They protect the brothels because it's their primary source of food (the working girls are probably changelings themselves) and leave most of Equestria to rot because ponies are naught more than chattel to them. They probably have changelings infiltrating the higher levels of each faction too, just to keep the ponies at war with one another. With all this disharmony going on, the wendigoes have taken over everything outside Canterlot, hence why the winters are always getting worse and the wind sounds like "it wants to kill them". Last but not least, the Elements of Harmony stopped working because Applejack was killed in the Crystal Empire when Sombra first returned.
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You are correct on some points, but I ain't gonna tell you which.
By the way, I'm reworking Chapter 5 and would greatly appreciate if you waited for about a week before I upload a re-edited version. It has some really low-quality stuff I wanted to fix before you (or everyone else for that matter) witnessed it.
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I'm running a tight schedule, this story's current arrangement has been locked in place for over a year, and I'm not about to delay the review because of the timing of your revisions. Sorry. If it helps, I'll be sure to include a notice in the review that it was undergoing revisions at the time of reading, but that's the best I can offer.
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You caught me with my pants down, really. Were you to give me a few months, that would be a story of much higher quality.
Well, I guess I have no choice but to have my garbage to be judged for what it is.
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Yeah, sorry about that. If postponing the review didn't mean adding 10k words/day to what will already be 30-40k words/day, I might have considered it.
10851229
You could forgo its reviewing and focus on something actually worth your attention.