After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.
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Thank you for reading!
This chapter seems to try to paint a political picture of TCE and the Crown being in the gray, but I don't really feel it.
Even if TCE makes food and products, does not make it ok for them to treat the workers bad or have slaves......
That the Crown has lost control over production for its own country (especially one in a wartime state) is stupid. Not the concept but that they let it happen, especially when they seem to have the military force under control.
It is hard for me to say it in few words, but I will try: any military force's 1. order of business is to secure its own supply line, then the supply line of any territory it owns. (even shorter: use military remove TCE)
That the Crown let TCE do what they do kind of puts them at fault.
Then there is a big bad-mouthing campaign against the Crown (who are changelings) I can not even, that is wrong on so many levels.
My conclusion Queen Chrysalis is behind all of it
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You certaintly have a point, but I'm yet to present the circumstances which led to such a skewed balance of forces in Canterlot.
Anyhow, thank you for the feedback and reading!
If twilight doesnt punch someones face in at some point by the end of this I am going to be disappointed.
All this episode did was sour my view on everyone here.
Hehehehheheh!
Another great chapter, I can't wait for the next one! :D
This just keeps getting better and better! I look forward to the next chapter!
look right and left of me
oh twilight sweetie you have no idea on dead on you are about that color things
Analogs.
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Fixed! Thank you.
What happened to the original cover image?
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Got removed since it no longer fits the story context.
I also try not to use cover images for my stories anymore and as such decided to 'update' the old stories.
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A month or two ago I tried finding this fic, turns out I didn't notice it because of the fact I was looking for the cover image of Twilight with a visor. I thought this fic got deleted so I gave up and moved on, I only stumbled onto to it recently.
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Sorry about that.