After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.
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Boring? I think not! Well some parts felt slow but i still loved it.
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I'm really glad you loved it!
Boring? I feel that doesn’t describe it properly. I’d say it’s more ‘well defined’. The whole world this happens in feels more real making it a much more intriguing and fun story to read. There may not be as much action but there is definitely a good story.
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I'm glad that you too enjoyed this chapter. And thanks for your kind words.
The world-building was indeed my goal in this chapter and I promise that next chapters are going to have more action or things happening in general.