After an accident involving Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, a confused mare wakes up in an Equestria she doesn't recognize. Set on finding out what happened after the failed experiment, she plunges herself into the grim streets of Canterlot.
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Another great chapter! I’m excited to see what you have in store for the future.
Though everything seems mostly good there are a few spots that have grammatical errors. I’m not on my computer at the moment so it’s not as easy for me to point out.
But those are also few and far between.
I hope to see an update to this soon!
This story's reaching Fallout Equestria levels of dark, only in some ways even darker. Looking forward to another great chapter!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this chapter, because I had doubts about how good it came out.
The next chapter will be posted in about a month, maybe even sooner. Keep an eye on updates!
Why did you make the chapters so long?
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Heh, a good question. I can't really say, I just write until I feel like I finished telling enough of the story. Also, for whatever reason chapters end up being longer than I planned.
I'm sorry if it's not very convenient. The next two chapters are not longer, but not shorter either. But right now I'm working on chapter seven and I will try to not make it as long as usual.
Hope you enjoy reading despite that.
Okay, pertinent question: Does this story take place in the 'Great Crystal War' alternate timeline from the Cutie Re-Mark episode? Or is this some other AU? I just want to make sure I have that clear.
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The short answer will be "no". Ironically, it is how this story was planned to go on the earliest stages of its creation, it was supposed to be set in the 'Great Crystal War' AU. However, this is an original AU with the only one difference from the show.
Guns do not equal power, no matter how many of them you bring with you.
Either ‘came from Zebrica’ or ‘came from the zebra’s’
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Fixed. Thank you once again.