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Lesse... Norwegian, male, about 20, been a brony since mid last autumn and read fics since early spring.

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The story starts with a young sergeant, hoping to mend a rocky start on her career, and bring peace to the galaxy.
Somewhere else, the Jedi have their own problems, and sends out a team in the hope of saving one of their own.

But their fates will soon intertwine, as they uncover a plot that might very well end everything they holds dear.

AN: any critique is welcome, i can't improve if noone will tell me what i am doing wrong :)
and, for the sake of the story, the ponies are bipedal here. makes the interraction with equiptment and weapons simpler

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I'd gladly answer any questions, but I'd love if they could been a little more specific?:applejackunsure:

It's kind of depressing to get downvotes without any explanation of why it is bad :S

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