Twilight was gone? How could this be? Her friends knew this would be a long arduous journey with many enemies to face, but they would stop at nothing to get their friend back! There isn't anything they wouldn't do, but just how high is the cost of true friendship? What would the ponies have to lose? I guess you will have to read to find out.
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Bring on the comments guys! I will take positive feedback and constructive criticism :)
This is a great story with a great twist and like you said to me"I would love to see where this story goes"!!!!!!!!!
I don't want to be rude, but... I think I died a little while trying to read the first paragraph...
1000607Whys that?
1002036 It's just...the grammar! Ugh! I do not wish to be rude, but that's something I cannot, in good conscious, let myself read. I didn't dislike it, though. After getting up to the part where Discord makes his appearance, however, I had to stop for the time being.
1002884Yeah i know what you mean, my editor didnt actually read it when he said he did. But ive got a new one and he is attempting to re edit them and they should be reposted by at least tomorrow.
1004129 Cool! Can't wait to see it when it's actually edited.
1004731ill let you know ^.^ im about to post what should be a fully edited chapter 4
1142541Perhaps in THIS story it does, but i am working on a one shot when i finish this one that may not follow that rule o.o