True Love (Chapter 3 - Final Chapter)
It had been a long day for Twilight. What was funny was she never had to worry about how she were to break up with Flash Sentry as he had already been cheating on her with another mare. Usually Twilight would be heart broken about this, but she couldn't be happier that Flash had done the cruel thing for her.
At the end of the day Twilight knew it was time. Time to tell Starlight how she feels.
"Can I open my eyes yet?" Starlight asked with a huge grin.
"We're almost there!" Twilight giggled. "Don't open those eyes yet!"
Twilight took Starlight up a big hill 5 minutes before sunset. As she reached the top of her destination she finally said: "Ok.. open your eyes!"
Starlight never opened her eyes quicker as she was so eager to see where Twilight had taken her.
"Wow!" Starlight gasped "It's beautiful!" she said, looking up at the sky ready for Princess Luna to raise the moon.
"Isn't it?" Twilight replied, then put a hoof around her friend and whispered, "I have another surprise for you aswell."
Starlight's ears perked up, "Really? What is it?"
And just as the moon rose, Twilight gave Starlight something she had wanted to give her all day and that was, a kiss.
Starlight blushed and said, "I-I was hoping you'd do that.." and kissed her back. The pair opened their lips for a deeper kiss. And then sat together and watched the moon rise.
As Twilight put her arm around Starlight she thought, "You know what? I thought today was gonna be awful, but it couldn't have been better."
Twilight had finally gotten the mare of her dreams.
The End
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As I said on the authors note in the last chapter, I personally think this story could improve alot more. It was mainly gonna be about Twilight breaking up with Flash but then I got more into the admitting to friends part.
it feels... a bit rushed, the first and second chapters were great but the third? it went by faster than sonic the hedgehog, oh well, good story overall.
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I really didn't know what else to write about in that chapter.
This was such a sweet fic, thank you ^^