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A dark and mysterious being is out for the princesses of Equestria. Little does Twilight Sparkle know, she’s the pick of the litter, and becomes this creature’s target and host. The Princess is in for a cruel fate, and plans on taking all of Equestria down with her. It's now up to the rest of main six to save her, with a certain impulsive unicorn along for the ride.
Takes place prior to the season 7 finale.
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Way to go, Cinni! I can't wait to see how the story goes!
Well, that escalated quickly.
Why is it that any being is it evil or good when possessing any major character or any they mess up by doing something like this
It's like they are pulling a Leeroy on any character they possess hoping no one will notice the minimal mistakes to the characters closest friends. It literally screams to Spike "You are not My Twilight! I must go get help!" or maybe he did not notice because he was scared. It makes me want to jump in there slapped that entity with my Villany 101 by Timorem Cruciatus and Villany: what it can do for You! by Rex Vivitar books for messing up right there! The Entity did great when it apologize but drops the ball at the end!
Other than that, great chapter I can't wait for the next one. It is making me curious who the entity is!
If said dark and mysterious being was voiced, what would he sound like?
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Was hoping to get around that with the whole 'unidentifiable as a living being' thing. Idk, who do you think would be good as the voice?
Yep. Twilight is fully under a mind control spell at this point.
Good God. I haven't even read this story yet (and I now have it on my reading list), but the Cover Art ALONE makes me want to read this. I mean that is a DISTURBING level of detail right there.
Why was I not notified of the previous chapter being posted? I know I am tracking it down!!
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The previous chapter was taken down and then re-published a couple weeks later. I don't think it notifies you of that. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Glad you're enjoying it so far!
Moar? This is a really good story and I would hate to see it die.
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Don't worry! More is on the way!
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Yayy
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I don't know, Tim Curry? He's good at voicing villains. So what you're saying is, the guy isn't King Sombra?
Yay, an update!
Thanks for the update I've really enjoyed you story. I hope you will be able to update again soon.
Please continue this story!