The Elements have many abilities. The ability to save. The ability to banish. The ability to protect. But one ability the Elements don't have is the ability to keep someone alive forever...
The Elements have many abilities. The ability to save. The ability to banish. The ability to protect. But one ability the Elements don't have is the ability to keep someone alive forever...
...could use some copyediting?
This isn’t a bad premise, especially for your first story. All it needs is a once over by an editor/proofreader.
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I don't know any editors
That was beautiful man.
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Thank you!