8545455 Well, kinda. She still kinda needs to be developed more for me to get a full opinion. I was just answering her internal question. It’s just something I do.
8545476 Oh, I thought you were answering the question I left in the author note and saying Thirteen and Seven don't deserve original names like Roxanna. My bad.
8545492 ...Autumn Wright, the adjunct accounting professor. I guess if you are reading a lot of stories, you can forget these things. She will get her turn teaching a class like Thomas did eventually. She knows a lot more about changelings now that Smokey Quartz took her under his wing for a bit.
8545507 She was a former human. In a previous chapter, we see chrysalis revive her from a pod after remaking her. She comments about the changeling being one of the humans who had taken over her drones. Bodo figures out that Roxanna was one of the students who caused them all to teleport into Equestria with their dimensional puncturing machine.
I hope to see how Roxanna develops maybe she make a good friend and well get a good meal without the enthrall and enslave bit a little untraditional and originality can go along way huh, I don't know if changelings with there numbers I don't know enough about them to really feel a name for them sorry maybe they can earn a nickname later?
8546795 We will see how Roxanna makes a friend soon. She will be important later as we see more of how her powers work. As for Seven and Thirteen, I understand. Anyways, I hope you are enjoying the story.
8547832 Good, glad to hear so. I mean I can totally see Spoiled getting her husband to do so, so that is something, but I look forward to the rest of their side of the story.
ok, so a lot of this chapter needs to be fleshed out, like an introduction to the new changelings, and possibly another chapter from the new changelings perspective when they were with Chrysalis. I also think you could just straight out flesh out this chapter in two chapters, it's too cramped, also the fight scene was a little cheesy, kinda like the train one, might want to redo that
“I think the emblem has too much happening in it. Why couldn’t they just stuck with one idea or theme?” Seven grumbled. She was born of the love collected by Thomas and Autumn, and the drone wanted things to make sense before being creative.
“I like it. It reminds us that every one of them gives their own part to our mission. If that means it is complex, so be it,” Thirteen replied. She didn’t complain much and could find joy in nonsense, being born from the love collected by Autumn and Bodo.
seems like Autumn is the whore of the group, it got a smile out of me at least
Comment posted by Knowledge deleted Nov 18th, 2017
8558421 Um...to be fair some of the drones come from Bodo and Thomas, and yet others from them and random other drones. Chyrsalis is making them without their knowledge with their tax love.
8558416 This chapter was mostly written to bridge the events of one chapter to the next. I agree a lot that it should have been fleshed out. I already cut it in in thirds, putting the second part in todays coming chapter, but that might not have been enough. I think the biggest problem is I could have made the chapter make a lot more sense if I just left off where the previous chapter ended. I will probably add that scene.
Hehe, nope. No they are not Roxanna.
8545436
I guess you liked Roxanna.
8545455
Well, kinda. She still kinda needs to be developed more for me to get a full opinion. I was just answering her internal question. It’s just something I do.
8545476
Oh, I thought you were answering the question I left in the author note and saying Thirteen and Seven don't deserve original names like Roxanna. My bad.
8545480
Oh. Well, I think I’d keep the numbers. The less OC names I have to track, the better.
8545485
Understandable.
8545491
So.... the three professors are Thomas, Bodo, and... who’s the other one?
8545492
...Autumn Wright, the adjunct accounting professor.
I guess if you are reading a lot of stories, you can forget these things. She will get her turn teaching a class like Thomas did eventually. She knows a lot more about changelings now that Smokey Quartz took her under his wing for a bit.
8545494
BTW, is Roxanna a human or pure changeling?
8545507
She was a former human. In a previous chapter, we see chrysalis revive her from a pod after remaking her. She comments about the changeling being one of the humans who had taken over her drones. Bodo figures out that Roxanna was one of the students who caused them all to teleport into Equestria with their dimensional puncturing machine.
I hope to see how Roxanna develops maybe she make a good friend and well get a good meal without the enthrall and enslave bit a little untraditional and originality can go along way
huh, I don't know if changelings with there numbers I don't know enough about them to really feel a name for them sorry maybe they can earn a nickname later?
8546795
We will see how Roxanna makes a friend soon. She will be important later as we see more of how her powers work. As for Seven and Thirteen, I understand. Anyways, I hope you are enjoying the story.
8547832
Good, glad to hear so. I mean I can totally see Spoiled getting her husband to do so, so that is something, but I look forward to the rest of their side of the story.
ok, so a lot of this chapter needs to be fleshed out, like an introduction to the new changelings, and possibly another chapter from the new changelings perspective when they were with Chrysalis. I also think you could just straight out flesh out this chapter in two chapters, it's too cramped, also the fight scene was a little cheesy, kinda like the train one, might want to redo that
ah, a nice reminder that we should hate Chryssi
“I think the emblem has too much happening in it. Why couldn’t they just stuck with one idea or theme?” Seven grumbled. She was born of the love collected by Thomas and Autumn, and the drone wanted things to make sense before being creative.
“I like it. It reminds us that every one of them gives their own part to our mission. If that means it is complex, so be it,” Thirteen replied. She didn’t complain much and could find joy in nonsense, being born from the love collected by Autumn and Bodo.
seems like Autumn is the whore of the group, it got a smile out of me at least
8558421
Um...to be fair some of the drones come from Bodo and Thomas, and yet others from them and random other drones. Chyrsalis is making them without their knowledge with their tax love.
8558416
This chapter was mostly written to bridge the events of one chapter to the next. I agree a lot that it should have been fleshed out. I already cut it in in thirds, putting the second part in todays coming chapter, but that might not have been enough. I think the biggest problem is I could have made the chapter make a lot more sense if I just left off where the previous chapter ended. I will probably add that scene.
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it was just something that i found funny