been playing a bit of shadow of Mordor huh? I didn't spot any major mistakes aside from spelling. also a great use of the changeling ability, I never thought of changelings as holy knights using faith to empower them. it is a great idea and even something you could base an entire story on
8505659 I haven't been playing it but the way Mackey's powers manifested reminded me of it. I just went with it and decided to use the same language I remembered when I played the original.
Anyways, I am glad you liked this action-oriented chapter. I wanted to give a clear indication that things are going to get harder here on out for our MCs and the train scenes. Everything has a price and there are no shortcuts (except for maybe Stein, but that is because he is clever).
been playing a bit of shadow of Mordor huh?
I didn't spot any major mistakes aside from spelling. also a great use of the changeling ability, I never thought of changelings as holy knights using faith to empower them. it is a great idea and even something you could base an entire story on
8505659
I haven't been playing it but the way Mackey's powers manifested reminded me of it. I just went with it and decided to use the same language I remembered when I played the original.
Anyways, I am glad you liked this action-oriented chapter. I wanted to give a clear indication that things are going to get harder here on out for our MCs and the train scenes. Everything has a price and there are no shortcuts (except for maybe Stein, but that is because he is clever).