8509470 Glad you thought it was good. I was worried that people would find Bodo annoying, which was part of the point even though there was a method to the madness here. It is good to know how a lie detection spell works if one works for a boss who uses them after all.
8509475 also, are you going to add the living pudding head into the story? i think unless you have something planned for her then you should leave her out, and only keep her writings
8509496 If you look back, I moved all mentions of a living Puddinghead to my short-stories fiction. The only thing that exists in this story is her writings.
The plan currently is to have a renaissance of sorts by revealing the true origins of Equestria. Ancient ideas, which were lost during the Ice Age and subsequent restructuring under the princesses, will come back. As for a living Puddinghead, I am considering it, but I don't want to make it that complex. I already have enough to write about without bringing in two dozen more characters that would go with her. Right now, the still living Puddinghead is in another dimension. If things continue as planned, this story will never mention the living one.
good good, nothing standing out at me
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Glad you thought it was good. I was worried that people would find Bodo annoying, which was part of the point even though there was a method to the madness here. It is good to know how a lie detection spell works if one works for a boss who uses them after all.
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also, are you going to add the living pudding head into the story? i think unless you have something planned for her then you should leave her out, and only keep her writings
8509496
If you look back, I moved all mentions of a living Puddinghead to my short-stories fiction. The only thing that exists in this story is her writings.
The plan currently is to have a renaissance of sorts by revealing the true origins of Equestria. Ancient ideas, which were lost during the Ice Age and subsequent restructuring under the princesses, will come back. As for a living Puddinghead, I am considering it, but I don't want to make it that complex. I already have enough to write about without bringing in two dozen more characters that would go with her. Right now, the still living Puddinghead is in another dimension. If things continue as planned, this story will never mention the living one.