Very vivid, yet also a bit mind-bending and surreal until the very end. Twilight's 'frenetic' assertion is a good way of describing the pacing and buildup of the fic as well.

I like it. This deserves way more views.

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Oh hey, I appreciate it! I did try to reflect her escalating, obsessive mindset in the narrative, which can be tricky in the third person, but apparently not entirely fruitless. Thanks!

And it might be a bit of a cliché, but, it's the quality of the readers - not the quantity - that really matters. I'm used to not getting any attention here, as I'm not screaming and shouting or shopping stories to blogs like EqD, and probably just don't really write what most people here are looking to read. That's okay. It's a very niche domain, so having any interest at all is probably still in part thanks to the mega-accessible age we're in. So, in all, I still think I'm fortunate! :D

You can has review!