A strange problem arises in Equestria that makes it impossible for stallions to impregnate their wives. Fortunately for them, some helpful zebra stallions are more than willing to take their place.
Huh, interesting alt-end. Still it would take a lot more than that just to abandon landmass size of equestria, with all it's cities/culture/etc, than racism caused by serious misinformation/lack of properly informing ahead from the zebras, and absolutely no diplomacy from the mares. I mean just one meeting and they decide to leave for good? Kinda suspicious in many ways.
Undoubtedly full of more taunting lewd pictures of what those zebras were doing to debase their wives and their bodies which were undoubtedly so covered in zebra cum that they were unidentifiable.
Undoubtedly full of more taunting lewd pictures
more taunting lewd pictures
more
That implies they've already seen pictures of zebras debasing mares.
Still having a hard time trying to comprehend a mysterious plague just rolls in and the zebras just so happen to show up and offered to replace the stallions all the while while taking Equestria's finances. Something tells me the chemicals in the water dissolve after a period of time leaving no evidence. But I will have to say it was mighty clever turning the Stallions rescue against them. But I think it's time to start colonizing with the Griffins. Sure no more Pony kids from the stallions in my opinion hippogriffs are a whole lot more awesome.
so much rofl it is so funny that all the stallions in equestria are the problem and that a different nations male populous is the exact reverse of them and they most likely wiped out as the new pony males grow up uncorrupted
Eh. That's all I really have to say. Even as a joke chapter this annoys me slightly. Oh would you look at that? The Zebras were actually telling the truth and the stupid Stallions who kept getting pictures of their wives, girlfriends and daughters fucked beyond belief and who have a right to be angry since the Zebra's broke the contract in so many ways by this point caused war, cause they're stupid. I really shouldn't expect anything else from this story.
Listen, if you like Zebradom, good on you. I don't mind it as a fetish, but if you want a clopfic with a story that's actually good? Stay the fuck away from Zebradom, read any of Sleepy's other stories they're much better than this one. It seems Zebradom clopfics can be excused for the shitty writing attached to them because if you point it out it makes you racist or some shit. But no, I stand by my original thoughts: As a story, this is awful. As a clop, It's okay.
As a fan of Zebra Domination Stories, I do like this bonus chapter. Even looking at it as a joke chapter, it still answered my questions. Even if it was not the answers I would’ve wanted, it was still well written. If not for this bonus chapter, I would’ve been left to assume the stallions were forgotten or just died off from illness, or worse, killed off behind the scenes as the mares lived in a sexual paradise with the Zebras. My only criticism for this bonus chapter was the fact that it was a joke chapter. With only minor tweaks here and there, it could be a canon ending. It can go one of many ways: 1. The stallions recover after several months and the mares return with new foals in tow (happily ever after) 2. The stallions all die or are forgotten, and the mares live with the zebra (netorare) 3. The stallions live or die, and the mares become devoted to the zebras, which was their plan (dark netorare) These are just a number of possible examples. I am still greatly impressed with the well developed characters and plot line, keeping things more complicated and planned out; as opposed to the more “come, break, and take” setup. The overall theme and tone of this story kept readers at the edge of their seats and I would recommend this story to anyone who loves a good Zebra Domination clop. Good job my friend
I was thinking of addressing all that in a blog post covering the future plot of this story, rather than writing another fic. So stay tuned. But Spike isn't dead or anything.
Hello. I've come up with a story. More like a sequel to what happened when all the mares left. I've only written one chapter so far but I would like you to read it over and tell me what you think. Any suggestions would be highly appreciated. My whole idea is that the stallions of Equestria do not die off. That the whole thing is truly a conspiracy. To put it bluntly the zebras have been playing the long game and want to return to Equestria to invade with with little or no resistance.
When will that blog post explaining the future of this story be done? I really want to know this story’ “True” ending, as well as what really happens to the mares, stallions, Zebras, and of course Spike. Not to mention the future of Equestria in general.
i dont understand the point of this ending, was it to make readers happy? its clear based on previous chapters that this ending makes absolutely no sense. The addition of this ending is poorly done and does not in anyway coincide with the entirety of the story. The previous bonus even tells us the mares are being fucked by the zebras. So the stallions are in the right and not wrong. Also you have the leaders of a sovereign nation just up and leaving with a majority of the population. I kinda feel like you had no clear goal in mind with this story and just wrote it on the fly.
I know this was supposed to be clop... but boy this ending was depressing and horrible. The males were willing to wage war for the sake of their loved ones while the woman are willing to abandon their husbands, fathers, brothers and sons after a 5 minutes chat just like that over a misunderstanding...they meant nothing to them. The true plot twist of this story is that those mares were the true monsters all along.
"And so it came to be that those heartless mares abandoned their sons, brothers, fathers and husbands, giving up their responsibilities, ambitions and loved ones in exchange for carnal pleasure on a foreign land. Shining eventually married queen Chrysalis and ruled Equestria along her. The stallions found changelings to be their perfect partners, because unlike those mares, changelings do value love"
Ah, dark ironic paranoid humor. You got to love/hate it.
Huh, interesting alt-end. Still it would take a lot more than that just to abandon landmass size of equestria, with all it's cities/culture/etc, than racism caused by serious misinformation/lack of properly informing ahead from the zebras, and absolutely no diplomacy from the mares. I mean just one meeting and they decide to leave for good? Kinda suspicious in many ways.
Still ok alt.
That implies they've already seen pictures of zebras debasing mares.
ROTFLMAO! Nice. BUT what about the Colts? the small male foals? are they force to live with their crazy dads or are they going with their mothers?
Those dumbassese!!
Yay new chapter ^-^
Still having a hard time trying to comprehend a mysterious plague just rolls in and the zebras just so happen to show up and offered to replace the stallions all the while while taking Equestria's finances. Something tells me the chemicals in the water dissolve after a period of time leaving no evidence. But I will have to say it was mighty clever turning the Stallions rescue against them. But I think it's time to start colonizing with the Griffins. Sure no more Pony kids from the stallions in my opinion hippogriffs are a whole lot more awesome.
so much rofl it is so funny that all the stallions in equestria are the problem and that a different nations male populous is the exact reverse of them and they most likely wiped out as the new pony males grow up uncorrupted
Eh. That's all I really have to say. Even as a joke chapter this annoys me slightly. Oh would you look at that? The Zebras were actually telling the truth and the stupid Stallions who kept getting pictures of their wives, girlfriends and daughters fucked beyond belief and who have a right to be angry since the Zebra's broke the contract in so many ways by this point caused war, cause they're stupid. I really shouldn't expect anything else from this story.
Listen, if you like Zebradom, good on you. I don't mind it as a fetish, but if you want a clopfic with a story that's actually good? Stay the fuck away from Zebradom, read any of Sleepy's other stories they're much better than this one. It seems Zebradom clopfics can be excused for the shitty writing attached to them because if you point it out it makes you racist or some shit. But no, I stand by my original thoughts: As a story, this is awful. As a clop, It's okay.
As a fan of Zebra Domination Stories, I do like this bonus chapter. Even looking at it as a joke chapter, it still answered my questions. Even if it was not the answers I would’ve wanted, it was still well written. If not for this bonus chapter, I would’ve been left to assume the stallions were forgotten or just died off from illness, or worse, killed off behind the scenes as the mares lived in a sexual paradise with the Zebras. My only criticism for this bonus chapter was the fact that it was a joke chapter. With only minor tweaks here and there, it could be a canon ending. It can go one of many ways:
1. The stallions recover after several months and the mares return with new foals in tow (happily ever after)
2. The stallions all die or are forgotten, and the mares live with the zebra (netorare)
3. The stallions live or die, and the mares become devoted to the zebras, which was their plan (dark netorare)
These are just a number of possible examples. I am still greatly impressed with the well developed characters and plot line, keeping things more complicated and planned out; as opposed to the more “come, break, and take” setup. The overall theme and tone of this story kept readers at the edge of their seats and I would recommend this story to anyone who loves a good Zebra Domination clop.
Good job my friend
I want to thank you for that story.it has giving me an idea for a something. Once I get the foundation I will be in contact.
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What exactly happened to Spike and all the ill males? And what about the children...?
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I was thinking of addressing all that in a blog post covering the future plot of this story, rather than writing another fic. So stay tuned.
But Spike isn't dead or anything.
Hello. I've come up with a story. More like a sequel to what happened when all the mares left. I've only written one chapter so far but I would like you to read it over and tell me what you think. Any suggestions would be highly appreciated. My whole idea is that the stallions of Equestria do not die off. That the whole thing is truly a conspiracy. To put it bluntly the zebras have been playing the long game and want to return to Equestria to invade with with little or no resistance.
will there be a second part or a sequel ?, I love this story
When will that blog post explaining the future of this story be done? I really want to know this story’ “True” ending, as well as what really happens to the mares, stallions, Zebras, and of course Spike. Not to mention the future of Equestria in general.
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Amen brother.
Shining use logic and reasoning.
It's not very effective.
I bet the griffons did this.
i dont understand the point of this ending, was it to make readers happy? its clear based on previous chapters that this ending makes absolutely no sense. The addition of this ending is poorly done and does not in anyway coincide with the entirety of the story. The previous bonus even tells us the mares are being fucked by the zebras. So the stallions are in the right and not wrong. Also you have the leaders of a sovereign nation just up and leaving with a majority of the population. I kinda feel like you had no clear goal in mind with this story and just wrote it on the fly.
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Did you read the author's note at the top of the chapter?
I know this was supposed to be clop... but boy this ending was depressing and horrible. The males were willing to wage war for the sake of their loved ones while the woman are willing to abandon their husbands, fathers, brothers and sons after a 5 minutes chat just like that over a misunderstanding...they meant nothing to them. The true plot twist of this story is that those mares were the true monsters all along.
"And so it came to be that those heartless mares abandoned their sons, brothers, fathers and husbands, giving up their responsibilities, ambitions and loved ones in exchange for carnal pleasure on a foreign land. Shining eventually married queen Chrysalis and ruled Equestria along her. The stallions found changelings to be their perfect partners, because unlike those mares, changelings do value love"
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Ma man!
https://zippy.gfycat.com/DeficientImmediateDassie.webm
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Wow...
This was an excellent series!