A strange problem arises in Equestria that makes it impossible for stallions to impregnate their wives. Fortunately for them, some helpful zebra stallions are more than willing to take their place.
I felt like I had to include a Pony ending for this tale after the last chapter. Even if it is a short cop out. Because seriously... fuck the zebras after that last chapter.
9619031 Glad I didn‘t listen then, this made for a much more suitable ending than the original one. Too many similar stories never fully explore this setting, probably because it might be a little disturbing to some.
Okay nice twist. However I'm going to do some contemplation. Because of your dark ending I do believe I have a story brewing in my head. It's not going to be easy but I think I can make something worthy to this story. When I get to First drafts up I'll drop you a link.
9697791 Thanks for your interest. But, to be honest, I haven't really thought up an interesting take on how exactly everyone else's stories will go down so I wouldn't be able to tell you now. I can tell you though I was thinking of making it even darker. The current take isn't scaring enough people off.
Was enjoying this until the implied Spike murder. Don't know, I just like the little guy and would have liked seeing him bro up with the zebra guys after them helping him with a lust filled mode similar to his greed one. Also could've used way more on Tia and Luna.
Wait, is this an incel story? Foids are evil, chads are evil and also horribly made racist stereotypes that would make The Turner Diaries look like Roots, it all ends up bad for everyone except the pathetic avatars of a simpering loser with the emotional sense of a sociopath? If I removed all MLP references this could go on FSTDT and no one would realize it's not the latest from an incel board. I'm not sure if I'm impressed or should have the cops check your basement, backyard and crawlspaces for women. Or, girls, really. Zebradom incels overlap super hard with MAP types. It's always about children.
10636883 Rumble was basically the way the zebras were planning on breeding an endless amount of more ponies, so he got a relatively good ending.
I didn't delve deeper into it, mostly because I'm not that into it, but the zebras also had a plan for mental abuse to turn them weak willed and disturbingly submissive to zebras and therefore maybe causing their offspring to share the same traits.
I felt like I had to include a Pony ending for this tale after the last chapter. Even if it is a short cop out. Because seriously... fuck the zebras after that last chapter.
9619031
This is the internet.
I'll do the exact opposite of what you told me and then complain despite the warnings telling me what I was in for.
Heh, remind's me of the classic "...And then they f*cked!"-solution .
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It was decent enough. And nice for them to say to tone it down to avoid racial issues too.
9619031
Honestly, I've read
Cocknie Thug
, this Zebra chapter is tame compared to it. Still, very enjoyable read. Only with individual mane 6 parts were longer and more detailed.
9619031
Glad I didn‘t listen then, this made for a much more suitable ending than the original one.
Too many similar stories never fully explore this setting, probably because it might be a little disturbing to some.
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Would they be forced to give up their privates as well? And what kind of work is expected of them?
I don't care what anyone says, I'm accepting this as the canon ending to this story.
what did she mean by 'another' race war....
Okay nice twist. However I'm going to do some contemplation. Because of your dark ending I do believe I have a story brewing in my head. It's not going to be easy but I think I can make something worthy to this story. When I get to First drafts up I'll drop you a link.
I like this story because my OC is half-zebra
9619034
Was the dark ending canon?
9697791
Thanks for your interest. But, to be honest, I haven't really thought up an interesting take on how exactly everyone else's stories will go down so I wouldn't be able to tell you now. I can tell you though I was thinking of making it even darker. The current take isn't scaring enough people off.
Was enjoying this until the implied Spike murder. Don't know, I just like the little guy and would have liked seeing him bro up with the zebra guys after them helping him with a lust filled mode similar to his greed one. Also could've used way more on Tia and Luna.
Hmm, needed more Luna.
Wait, is this an incel story? Foids are evil, chads are evil and also horribly made racist stereotypes that would make The Turner Diaries look like Roots, it all ends up bad for everyone except the pathetic avatars of a simpering loser with the emotional sense of a sociopath? If I removed all MLP references this could go on FSTDT and no one would realize it's not the latest from an incel board. I'm not sure if I'm impressed or should have the cops check your basement, backyard and crawlspaces for women. Or, girls, really. Zebradom incels overlap super hard with MAP types. It's always about children.
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I avoided the dark ending per author note advice.
I’m curious though, why was Rumble important? Or is that part of the reason to avoid the dark ending?
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Rumble was basically the way the zebras were planning on breeding an endless amount of more ponies, so he got a relatively good ending.
I didn't delve deeper into it, mostly because I'm not that into it, but the zebras also had a plan for mental abuse to turn them weak willed and disturbingly submissive to zebras and therefore maybe causing their offspring to share the same traits.