The Zebra Conspiracy
written by Very Sleepy
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Man... what a day to be uploading a chapter for this particular story...
...I'm beginning to think Zed and his folks are up to something...
This whole story reminds me of this:
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I think you're just being a bit paranoid.
There's nothing shady going on here. The contract they signed even said exactly that!
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Suuuurrre. ;P
it would be kind of funny if cadence turned shinning into a mare so he could join and getting mind broken in the process then zed become there master and take the empire for the zebras while cadence and shinning are the new kings cock sock brood mares
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With a changeling Invasion it will soon turn into a running gag cease to be fappable but laughable. That being said very sleepy very good chapter and looking forward to more.
Given how few couples are available, I was expecting a basic sequel and done. Going the 'zebra domination' route will certainly add longevity. I'm curious to see if you try to balance the initial premise against a more common 'forceful takeover' story, or opt soley for one or the other. One critique; Cadence's utter lack of suspicion really tested my suspension of disbelief. Yes she's kinda drugged out, but still. "Let's round up all of the guys, you know, for safety". *Smile and nod* lol. Twighlight would be a potentially hilarious side-story here, taking a complete bookish/learning approach to being kinky.
Is the story commission is that why it took so long to update
I want to like this chapter, I really do.
But it's just too all over the place.
At least Shining suspects something this time. But I swear, this seems to be going more and more into OP Gary Stu territory. Zed... I hate him, hate him with a passion. He's just so perfect and this world seems to be based on a "All women love rough sex with big dicks," trope. I expected more, to be honest but I know you're writing the stuff you want to write(which is okay, and respectable). I really wanted to like this story and I'm sorry.
I really enjoyed the clop parts in the earlier chapters but... even with her being a little drugged its way too obvious what they're actually doing and i doubt an alicorn like Cadance would just accept this. Heck, Celestia and Luna would be suspicious as hell.