Epilogue
Dear... Journal? Should I call you that, or... Do people usually give you names? Ah, never mind. I’ll just call you journal for now.
Okay... Dear Journal,
It’s been three weeks since I left the hospital, and ever since, I have slowly been feeling the pain from my burns. I got the idea to hold on to the pain, and feel it later from Rainbow, when she told me about how she held in her sweat. I just realised that, maybe you can do it with pain. And it worked.
Twilight gave me the idea to write this, because it’s a good way for the author to tie up loose ends, as well as helping me with anything I might forget. For the past three weeks my memory has been a bit off. I mean, I forgot PINKIE PIE of all ponies a few days ago. PINKIE PIE. So, I’m writing this. Speaking of my friends, I guess you’ll want to know what’s going on with them? Well... A few things have happened with them.
Let’s see... Fluttershy and Big Macintosh have been spending A LOT of time together, which has sparked some rumours that they’re going out. I wouldn’t be surprised if they were. Rarity has met some fashion designer pony guy, who she loves more than anything. Twilight has been looking after Celestia in Ponyville General hospital, because The Princess didn’t want to be bothered in Canterlot. AJ has met some banker guy, and hired him to work at her farm, but I see the way they look at each other. Pinkie Pie hasn’t met anyone yet, but she has been acting kinda strange around Twilight, and the way she looks at her when she thinks no-one is looking, makes me think Pinkie Pie might have some unsaid feelings. I might have to talk to her about it.
he Changelings have agreed to peace with Equestria. They have buried Chrysalis, and named a new Queen. I didn’t catch her name. Speaking of Changelings, Saralys has moved to Ponyville, and we are closer than ever. The residents of Ponyville took some convincing, but once they saw how nice Saralys was to Applebloom and the... CMC?... They came ‘round, and now she is accepted as one of us. Luna has been doing well with raising the sun and the moon while Celestia heals. Celestia and I had a really long talk a few days ago, and I let everything out. I told her everything I could remember, and then some. I told her about how I felt, and how I regretted killing those changelings, and I ended up in tears. She comforted me, and I left with a smile on my face.
I have moved in with Rainbow, and Rarity joked that she would start planning our wedding... Or at least... I think she was joking... Never mind. I would gladly marry Rainbow, but I think she would be a bit overwhelmed if I started planning a wedding she hadn’t been told about. Haha. I still help AJ with Applebucking from time to time when her stallion isn’t at the bank. I help out Twilight with the Library every now and again. She tries to give me money every time, but I refuse, saying that I won’t accept payment from friends. She sulks every time. Rainbow doesn’t ask for rent; the first time I tried she refused to take it. Fluttershy and I have become good friends, and we go to the spa every week with Rarity. I just do it for something to do. I hate getting pampered, but when Fluttershy asked me if I would like to join them, she was smiling so widely it would have been like kicking Applebloom on her birthday --No, worse-- to say no. I have ben flying with Rainbow Dash every day, and I must say, it’s the highlight of my days, flying with her like that. I still have nightmares occasionally, but none of them involve Chrysalis. I just dream I’m back in that raid, and I try to think what I could have done differently... Then it all comes crashing down and I wake up in Rainbow’s strong hooves. She always wakes up and tries to comfort me when this happens. I don’t have nightmares every night, but when I do, it feels so nice to wake up with Rainbow hugging me. We made it public a few days ago. Me and her, that is. Somepony threw a tomato at her, but it was returned to sender at double the speed and ten times the age. The pony who threw it was a filly name Diamond Tiara. She’s been smelling like year-old tomatoes ever since, and I have heard her talking about moving away. Applebloom seemed happy about Diamond Tiara’s punishment. Everypony else has been really supportive. I was called out to Fillydelphia, Manehattan, and Appeloosa a few days after I left the hospital, and I went to clear up Discord’s spells, which were still running rampant without the Draconequus controlling them. But other than that, everything is settling down in the aftermath of Discord’s and Chrysalis’ attack. Just writing her name makes me want to hit something. But Celestia just said that I have to move on, and that the ‘hole in my heart would heal.’ This surprised me, as I hadn’t told Celestia about how I saw Chrysalis as a mother, but then again, she IS Princess Celestia. She seems to be learning how to walk again, slowly, but it might be a while before she can do it by herself. Every time I apologise to her, she just says I did what I had to do, and she thanks me. THANKS ME. For taking away her ability to walk, and her ability to fly. Anyway, I think I should wrap this up, as I can hear Rainbow calling me. She says we are going to go and meet the others at Sugarcube Corner for something to eat.
It’s nice to finally have friends to count on.
That’s it...
The end.
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914482 Done. (Cute video by the way, I LQL'd as soon as it started)
Good show! Are you going to make a 2nd story off of this if you do i have an idea for it.
933662 What is your idea? TELL ME
If... you know... you want to.
933685 spin off abit you made the end to happy so why not throw a new foe that is rit under there noses in the 2nd story
933695 A new bad guy... GENIUS! That way, I could explore the other relationships among the others (With the exception of AJ, who got together with the main character of Scorched) And I could have something else to do for a few more days! YAY! You, my friend are a genius.
Any ideas for the antagonist?
933710 Your chatting with him lol
933720 What do you mean? Include you?
933745 I mean my OC zoom or luke. he come in like sky but he knows all about his past and his falllin GF hit hit
933759 I'll have a look and see what I can do. This is going to be good.
933775 well me OC is in 2 storys lol and in both he's a litte diffent. wow i can't spell lol
919420 just spelling and grammar issues, only minor, nothing to worry about.
Yay done! I do have a few thoughts.
I felt you had a good idea and story but to me it was very rushed. Instead of just telling us what happened, try to make us see through character's eyes and emotions. I can understand wanting to share this quickly though.
All in all I enjoyed it but if you are writing a 2nd part, part try more descriptions! I look forward to seeing more.
941886 Thanks, I have posted The Second Story Of Sky Blue, and I'm working on it at the moment. Thanks for the advice, but may I ask, when you say 'try more descriptions', do you mean of the characters, or of the events in the story? One more thing, how was the storyline itself? That was my biggest worry as I wrote. I have only seen season one and the first two episodes of season two. Did I do a good job with it? You seem pretty good with these things.
945792
I guess descriptions was a bad word (I was at work on my phone) What I mean is in a story there is nothing more that I love when you get to get behind the eyes of the characters the author has created and be sucked into it emotionally. Like say when there is a twist I noticed you would say what it was, they would all have
reactions, and then you would just move right along after that. To me that makes it unsatisfying and frustrating. I want to know what some of the others (or the relevant ones) think and how they get through that thought process, and pulling on some of the lessons they have learned from the show.
Hopefully for what its worth that will help you out!
Also you really should watch the 2nd season! Some good episodes in there
947117 Like I think I said, I've only seen first two episodes and yesterday I saw This Day Aria. Thanks for clearing that up btw, I was wondering what you meant. So instead of saying, for instance, 'They wer all angry' or something like that, I would write it from their perspectives, and write what they were thinking? Sorry if I misunderstood, I only really got into writing about a week and a half ago, although none if that stuff was as large as this. Like I said, I am experimenting at the moment. I'm not used to implementing these things yet. Sorry if it ruined it for you. I will try and implement what you said into my next story. Rhanks again. Btw, writing this on my phone too, so sorry if it is a bit hard to follow.
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No worries! At least you have actually written your story! I'm still stuck on the whole 'sit down and write' part.
Just keep writing and you will learn as you go! Its like when I read a webcomic and watch the artist go from the art skill in the beginning to the art skill when I catch up. Only get better with more practice.
1026500 Sky Blue, you mean? What do you mean?
good story! at times it seemed confusing but made more sense as the story went on. such as skyblue having magic but then you explained how the 7th element could give pegasi magic. cant wait for updates to your other stories!
1147229 You'll get them! And, it was meant to be a bit confusing. I tried to do what other authors do, in that I tried to make the reader wonder what the buck was going on.
yeah though sometimes i feel that you didnt really get into skys emotions enough, im starting to read the second one and she doesnt seem so attached to rainbow as you would think.
1147286 Oops. I tried to explore that in TSOSB, and TTSOSB, but I guess I was a little off on that one. I can't believe it. It is actually centered around her feelings, and I didn't even do it right.
actually now that im getting into the second one it feels more present
1147380 Ah, good.
well goodnight. cant wait for more of youdash!