Rainbow Dash, Element of Loyalty, never leaves a friend hanging. But she did leave one friend hanging, at least in the eyes of that pony.
This pony, Lightning Dust, wonders why as she relives her side of the story through the bottom of a cider mug.
So yeah, I'm something of a Lightning Dust fan and disappointed with the small amount of stories here exploring her character, so I decided to give it a shot. A one shot to be specific. Feel free to provide constructive criticism or grammatical advice since I haven't done this thing before.
Chapters (1)
Do a sequel
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I might. I wanna see how this goes first, what people think of it, etc.
I gotta agree, LD got the short end of the straw at the academy. if by some chance you are gonna be at Bronycon this year. i'm cosplaying Lightning Dust on Saturday
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Awesome. I don't go to cons unfortunately but I'm glad to hear about Dust gettin some love.
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http://codyandgwen.deviantart.com/art/Fb-Img-1500249900979-693787554
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Nice. I'm diggin the goggles in particular there. And I like your Sunday pokémon choice.
I gotta say any story that involves LD makes my day, as long as it shows her good side. You definitely did that
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I'm glad ya liked it. I've been getting some more ideas and I'll probably explore Lightning Dust more through a few different possibilities. I'm not sure I'll necessarily do a sequel to this specifically but I love LD and have other ideas that involve her.
Wait so rainbow dash rejected her as a mistake? If I was lightning dust I would take offense to that.