UPDATE! Even better than that, you returned Mandalore to having honor. I usually am NOT offended by much of anything, PI^% AS FU&% every other day over something probably but what the Clones Wars showed Mandalore as. THAT WAS OFFENSIVE! But considering how much of a fight any half trained Madalorian soldier could give a jedi Knight, if not Master, it does make sense that the Republic and jedi would work to destroy the will of Madalore to the point even broken lapdogs having more fight
8987992 I was going with the idea that Gar Saxon wiped out most of the experienced Mandalorian Warriors and the majority of these Mandalorian Commandos SCAR Squad faced are just half-trained Mandalorians in armor. Also, they were going up against SCAR Squad who wiped out an entire Rebel base alone, wiped out Leia’s, Hans, and Luke’s Rebel teams aboard the Harbinger, and went toe to toe with the heroes and made it out alive.
8988199 The Wrens are one clan. You don’t know how many from other clans have been killed or scattered in the galaxy. Also, take note. In the previous battle, many Mandalorian Commandos including Sabine’s mom and brother were killed. Their mission was to board the Admonitor and the transports, but clearly, their transports didn’t make it.
As for SCAR Squad, they’ve wiped out entire Rebel groups by themselves like nothing. Sgt. Kreel went toe to toe with Luke in lightsaber battles. In fact, Kreel taught Luke how to properly use the lightsaber when he was an undercover agent.
8988211 Still these are mandalorians, they took on Jedi and did well and again template for the Clone Troopers. I expet a better fight on the ground with them.
8988246 Again, you have to remember many of the experienced Mandalorian Commandos were killed during the Siege of Mandalore, more probably killed when they resisted the Empire post-Order 66, more were killed by Gar Saxon, and even more killed in the Battle of Hamed when Thrawn’s fleet destroyed their transports. Mandalorians are strong, but not invincible. I like Mandalorians too, but I like to think that most of their experienced warriors were killed in a series of losses after Satine Kryze’s downfall.
8988734 yet when they did rebel they did very well the Mandalorians are nearly Spartan in how they do stuff. so again I think ground wise would do better then you are givning them.
8988859 I understand, but like I said, the majority of these Mandalorians are not experienced and are sub-par at best compared to those who were killed at Halmed.
However, the Mandalorians will not end in the next chapter. I’m bringing them back at future chapters and they won’t be so sub-par.
"You will have sixty seconds to get your hands free from its straps and use the key to unlock the device from your head."
"Hello...I want to play a game with you..."
For a minute, I thought they were making a metaphor for Syndulla himself being the bait for his daughter.
"It was predicted. Wish we were groundside to watch it though. Kanan and Ezra would've loved it." Hera said as she stared at the wall. A few years back, she etched on the wall, For Kanan and Ezra , to remind herself what they're fighting for.
Are we gonna' find out what happened soon? (Best Tarkin Impression) My patience is far from limitless.
Alright, finally, we have here is the Warlock-class Star Destroyer." Thrawn actually smiled when he saw the design of an enlarged Star Destroyer with the middle front section removed for a planetary-scale ion cannon.
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"Negative Captain, if we defeat one of the Empire's Grand Admirals here and now, we will deal a severe blow to them and teach them to never touch Mandalore again."
Oh you silly, silly man.
Twilight fired her pistol, trying to kill the last Mandalorian Commando who was hiding behind some crates.
They don't make 'em like they used to.
"I guess this is what we get for putting a pink paint bomb in one of the toilets in theAdmonitor." Tee said.
Okay, seriously, I don't mind spoilers! I have to know who was using the toilet when it went off!
"Traitor." He sneered as he fired his blaster on the woman's face until it was nothing but smoldering pieces of flesh.
Her mind wondered to the servant she killed. If there's anything she learned about war prior to her exile was that there will always be civilian casualties.
Sheesh. Twilight's become quite a bit more cynical than she used to be.
Fa'Rikool froze.
It was at this moment that he knew...He F**ked Up!
“Let’s find out. So how about it? Wanna dance Bo-Katan Kryze?”
9131329 Yeah. How else would I know the corrupt practices of the street police? Anyways, according to this reply, you are Indonesian and lives in the US while at the same time is supposed to be loaded with money but got swindled or cockblocked. Is that right?
9131341 We’re not suppose to be in debt I’ll tell you that much. We should’ve been able to afford tuitions for both Art Center College of Design and USC no problem. My sister shouldn’t have to use a car that has problems constantly. A hospital bill shouldn’t be able to put my family down under. My mom shouldn’t have to work 3 jobs to pay the bills. My dad shouldn’t have to search for years to get a project.
Yes, we should’ve had enough money to live comfortably and a steady income, but all that money is gone because our relatives spent them all on useless shit and now they’re in a worse state than we are.
I don't like it based on the fact that they WON'T get even, the a**hole equines keep winning and even if Spike and Twilight get around to getting payback it'll take WAY too damn long and/or they're just going to forgive and get forgiven and all of that BS.
A servant. Don't worry about it. Nothing we could do now.
Meh, it's Mandalore. There's no such thing as a civilian there. Every Mandalorian is trained from birth to be basically space Spartans. Even the pacifistic New Mandalorians, judging from Satine.
Even with the fall of Mandalore, the loss of a Super Star Destroyer would cause many more planets to break away and join the Rebellion.
No, it would have the opposite effect. If it took the Mandalorians their homeworld, it's defenses, it's platforms, and the Mandalorian badasses themselves to merely take a Super Star Destroyer down with them, it would make the Empire that much more terrifying to the galaxy.
Okay, legit problem with the fic. It's not an MLP fic. We spend not even a tenth of our time with Twilight and Spike, or even on one character, and instead of focusing more on Twilight and Spike, you throw in even more characters from different properties.
This would be an interesting story to read as well, space faring Equestria, Exiled Twilight and Spike, Twilight and spike figuring out how to live their new lives. Instead, we've got a Starwars fic with some MLP and Gravity Falls cameos.
I'm going to go ahead and stop reading here. I suggest an editor as well, since there are numerous mistakes that could be solved by just having a second person look over it.
9960108 Ok no problem. I only write for fun which I’ve explained a thousand times and no I’m not gonna take my time to get an editor. Only way I would take this seriously is if I’m getting paid which I’m obviously not.
"However, this is different. Call it, reversed if you will. Instead of trapping the prey, this device will pry your jaw open...permanently. Right here, is a key." Kreel said as he put the key on Cham's right hand. "You will have sixty seconds to get your hands free from its straps and use the key to unlock the device from your head."
Succy succy fibe dorra.
UPDATE!
Even better than that, you returned Mandalore to having honor. I usually am NOT offended by much of anything, PI^% AS FU&% every other day over something probably but what the Clones Wars showed Mandalore as. THAT WAS OFFENSIVE!
But considering how much of a fight any half trained Madalorian soldier could give a jedi Knight, if not Master, it does make sense that the Republic and jedi would work to destroy the will of Madalore to the point even broken lapdogs having more fight
It's worth the wait. I really hope for part 2 soon.
I wanna see Twilight and Spike kick Rebel ass.
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Is there room for one more on that boat of yours? I want in.
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Make that three!
Wonder what Sun-Taint is doing by the way
Hey man Soloi was actually pretty good. Not Rogue One good but still good. Don't let The Last Jedi discourage you from seeing it.
New chapter coming soon I hope.
Kinda bummed how one sided this is. these are mandalorians. Even if they lose they should take down more then they are in ground
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I was going with the idea that Gar Saxon wiped out most of the experienced Mandalorian Warriors and the majority of these Mandalorian Commandos SCAR Squad faced are just half-trained Mandalorians in armor. Also, they were going up against SCAR Squad who wiped out an entire Rebel base alone, wiped out Leia’s, Hans, and Luke’s Rebel teams aboard the Harbinger, and went toe to toe with the heroes and made it out alive.
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I don't think Saxon did. the Wren's are pretty good. and remember this people are the template for the CLONE TROOPERS.
Not famaliar with Scar Squad
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The Wrens are one clan. You don’t know how many from other clans have been killed or scattered in the galaxy. Also, take note. In the previous battle, many Mandalorian Commandos including Sabine’s mom and brother were killed. Their mission was to board the Admonitor and the transports, but clearly, their transports didn’t make it.
As for SCAR Squad, they’ve wiped out entire Rebel groups by themselves like nothing. Sgt. Kreel went toe to toe with Luke in lightsaber battles. In fact, Kreel taught Luke how to properly use the lightsaber when he was an undercover agent.
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Still these are mandalorians, they took on Jedi and did well and again template for the Clone Troopers. I expet a better fight on the ground with them.
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Again, you have to remember many of the experienced Mandalorian Commandos were killed during the Siege of Mandalore, more probably killed when they resisted the Empire post-Order 66, more were killed by Gar Saxon, and even more killed in the Battle of Hamed when Thrawn’s fleet destroyed their transports. Mandalorians are strong, but not invincible. I like Mandalorians too, but I like to think that most of their experienced warriors were killed in a series of losses after Satine Kryze’s downfall.
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yet when they did rebel they did very well the Mandalorians are nearly Spartan in how they do stuff. so again I think ground wise would do better then you are givning them.
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I understand, but like I said, the majority of these Mandalorians are not experienced and are sub-par at best compared to those who were killed at Halmed.
However, the Mandalorians will not end in the next chapter. I’m bringing them back at future chapters and they won’t be so sub-par.
"Hello...I want to play a game with you..."
For a minute, I thought they were making a metaphor for Syndulla himself being the bait for his daughter.
Are we gonna' find out what happened soon?
(Best Tarkin Impression) My patience is far from limitless.
Big Blue Daddy Like!
Oh you silly, silly man.
They don't make 'em like they used to.
Okay, seriously, I don't mind spoilers! I have to know who was using the toilet when it went off!
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That Was Savage!!!
Sheesh. Twilight's become quite a bit more cynical than she used to be.
It was at this moment that he knew...He F**ked Up!
LLLLLLLLLLLETS GET READY TO RUMBLLLLLLLLE!!!
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I thought about using Cham as bait, but it seemed premature to me. I have plans for her later.
You'll find out about Kanan and Ezra later.
As for the pink toilet bomb, I wasn't going to delve into it, but the unfortunate victim was suppose to be Captain Niriz.
9131329
Yeah.
How else would I know the corrupt practices of the street police?
Anyways, according to this reply, you are Indonesian and lives in the US while at the same time is supposed to be loaded with money but got swindled or cockblocked.
Is that right?
9131341
We’re not suppose to be in debt I’ll tell you that much. We should’ve been able to afford tuitions for both Art Center College of Design and USC no problem. My sister shouldn’t have to use a car that has problems constantly. A hospital bill shouldn’t be able to put my family down under. My mom shouldn’t have to work 3 jobs to pay the bills. My dad shouldn’t have to search for years to get a project.
Yes, we should’ve had enough money to live comfortably and a steady income, but all that money is gone because our relatives spent them all on useless shit and now they’re in a worse state than we are.
9131375
Karma.
Doing revenge for you.
Also, continue this story.
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I’m updating this story next. I’m working on the next chapter.
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His AT-ST may be the most ridiculous SW Vehicle I've ever seen.
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Have you not seen the TIE Bizarro?
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That's... something
I don't like it based on the fact that they WON'T get even, the a**hole equines keep winning and even if Spike and Twilight get around to getting payback it'll take WAY too damn long and/or they're just going to forgive and get forgiven and all of that BS.
F**k...Off...
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You sir, are projecting.
Meh, it's Mandalore. There's no such thing as a civilian there. Every Mandalorian is trained from birth to be basically space Spartans. Even the pacifistic New Mandalorians, judging from Satine.
No, it would have the opposite effect. If it took the Mandalorians their homeworld, it's defenses, it's platforms, and the Mandalorian badasses themselves to merely take a Super Star Destroyer down with them, it would make the Empire that much more terrifying to the galaxy.
Okay, legit problem with the fic. It's not an MLP fic. We spend not even a tenth of our time with Twilight and Spike, or even on one character, and instead of focusing more on Twilight and Spike, you throw in even more characters from different properties.
This would be an interesting story to read as well, space faring Equestria, Exiled Twilight and Spike, Twilight and spike figuring out how to live their new lives. Instead, we've got a Starwars fic with some MLP and Gravity Falls cameos.
I'm going to go ahead and stop reading here. I suggest an editor as well, since there are numerous mistakes that could be solved by just having a second person look over it.
9960108
Ok no problem. I only write for fun which I’ve explained a thousand times and no I’m not gonna take my time to get an editor. Only way I would take this seriously is if I’m getting paid which I’m obviously not.
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