It's alive .... ALIVE. What spike did was pretty bad ass. Im surprised twilight didnt just grab wren while he was running and drag him back with telekinesis.
9222772 Remember that she intends to keep her usage of magic to the minimum, especially when they can just straight up kill him. Imagine if her usage of magic went public. Many would come after her.
9222854 Use the force twilight use the force telekinesis is her one power that can be waved off as her being a force user and the glowing can be written off as a species specific trait like how that winged mole race cant be jedi mind tricked into compliance .... aren't wookies immune too can't remember 100% .... plus dead men tell no tales .... muhaha. No witnesses..but sir there children ...i repeat no witnesses. Meh no biggie i guess.
9222910 Except she doesn’t use the force and her horn glows when using magic.
Remember that she is in the city. There are people hiding in the buildings. She doesn’t know if civilians were watching her but she wasn’t taking any chances.
9222979 No no what i was saying is most people would associate her telekinesis automatically as her using the force people know about jedis they don't know magic ....as long as she sticks to tk and doesnt do beam blasts or teleport ....not many know about force lightning so beams cant be associated to the force.....plus the mandalorians had a giant war against the jedis before the jedi layed down the whoop ass on them ...and it glowing can just be associated a quirk of her race its not like theirs another unicorn around to say it isnt the force ....or would they even care to answer if asked they are supremacists after all. Hymn .... it would make her a bounty hit by deathwatch the mandalorian old guard .. they detest jedi and if they think shes one it could get real bad for her. That'd be a good reason to keep it hush hush but could open up more action sequences as they try to take out the percieved jedi. She did tk them to the ground you could have a commando in the shadows see it... pros and cons i guess.
Oh yah before i forget glad to see the story continue im really enjoying it .... throm reminds me off a older lelouch from code geass. Need more .... MOOOORE.... im in need of my throm fix man.
9223124 Sorry my bad yes thrawn dont know why i keep calling him throm for some reason.... lol shes a new species no one knows anything about her period ...she could pee lemonade and poop ice cream her glowing if shes *holds finger bunny ears up and wiggles them up and down* using the force *wink wink* isn't that weird of a species trait. Give her a light saber or 4 to finish the image no one would even ask questions... probably... except real sith or jedi.
9223163 Exactly, Sith and Jedi would tell she’s not one of them obviously. There are Jedi among the Rebels and there are Sith among the Imperials.
Also, it might cause a panic too. She’s the only member of her species they knew. Many would think everyone in her species can use magic like her and it would cause panic.
Knowledge of her power must be kept at the minimum to avoid panic and unnecessary attention.
9223196 I agree with you don't get me wrong real jedi or sith will know immediately.... you gonna go the grey jedi route for them ... yah spike would make a bad ass sith and twi could make a good jedi but ... i cant picture spike going total dark and twi could go empress twilight when palpatine and the equestrian counsel is nixed.
9223528 Don’t worry, not everyone’s gonna die. It would be dumb to kill every beloved character.
Highly risky to kill a beloved character in the first place, but I know which ones are expendable.
Btw, big fan of the Original Trilogy characters and I’m a big fan of Mark Hamill and Harrison Ford (mainly because of the other movies and shows they’ve been in).
Now that is great chapter ending the battle in high note.
Spike and Twilight did there best with SCAR Squad for eliminating Mandalorian forces and completing there mission as all Rebel resistance are dead including Counselor Wren. The fight with Kreel and Kryze was very glorious and it almost end in a stalemate but wit Kreel's sneaky and unexpected move, the Commando of Mandalor is captured and defeated.
I agree that this is truly a turning point for the war as the Rebels. With the big loss of Mandalore the Rebels morale has gone done and Admiral Thrawn has now a stepping stone for his views to become to reality along with the officer, soldiers and crew under him along with the help Twilight and Spike.
And Admiral Immodet is opening his eyes for the first time to rethink everything he knew.
You did an amazing job for making the chapter and I appreciate that you give us a story that we can thrill and enjoy. I know your facing tremendous hardships in your health and personal life, but as fan of yours and everyone else that enjoyed your stories we still support you now matter what. And you are not alone with the hardships of life because we go through it and nothing can change it. I know that is wishful thinking but we have to move on with our lives and you shouldn't lose hope for it. Take your time with friends and enjoy life, because you are not alone for the pursuit of happiness.
9223886 I initially was gonna have Thrawn, Niriz, or Kreel be Twilight’s next mentor, but then I realized that won’t be a big part of the story so I changed it.
Ah, another wonderful chapter. It's always exciting seeing this in my favorites list with an update, very rarely does anyone writing Star Wars fanfics, be them crossover or not, has such a masterful knowledge of the Star Wars Expanded Universe.
Still wondering, though, if the Zann Consortium will ever make an appearance in this. Between Thrawn's rivalry with Tyber Zann, and the fact of Zann's ship suppliers from Mandal Hypernautics, it'd feel kind of empty to not have them here, even if just briefly mentioned...
9224390 There is no shame. The Americans were defeated by weather when they invaded Canada and the same for the French and the Germans when they invaded the Soviets.
Wonderfull Chapter! Can't wait to see whats going to happens next!
P.S: I shamefully had to look what a Nemesis Class Gunship was, because I never played the game it was in. now i try to image how the Rebels here were fucked by this Beast! Ouch!
This is an amazing chapter I can only imagine that next chapter we get a look at celestial forces or what they have been up to this intire time. Can’t wait for the next update.
Ps. Is there a possibility of twi coming in command of her own ship or having a high rank in the Hand or the over all empire, more so the Hand if I’m correct about Thrawns over all plans.
9759680 Like other non-Humans who are humanoid, Shadow Trooper armor without the helmet. Hers has holes on the back to accommodate her wings and the emblem of the Empire of the Hand is on the right breastplate.
“Right, magic. In a galaxy full of space wizards, I should expect nothing less. Next, you’re going to tell me that out there, an army of Humans lost a war to a bunch of flightless birds. Anywho, I’ll see ya’ll down there.” Mic said as he and Aero jumped over the edge.
Oh you don't know the half of it, it was EMU! Emu meat is surprising tasty by the way.
Yay! Happy to see this back!
Thanks for taking the time to do this.
Then again, even with the Emperor and Vader gone I would like to imagine a purple duo taking the Empire right from under them.
I love the Emu War reference.
It's alive .... ALIVE. What spike did was pretty bad ass. Im surprised twilight didnt just grab wren while he was running and drag him back with telekinesis.
finally a new chapter
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Remember that she intends to keep her usage of magic to the minimum, especially when they can just straight up kill him. Imagine if her usage of magic went public. Many would come after her.
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I had to.
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Use the force twilight use the force telekinesis is her one power that can be waved off as her being a force user and the glowing can be written off as a species specific trait like how that winged mole race cant be jedi mind tricked into compliance .... aren't wookies immune too can't remember 100% .... plus dead men tell no tales .... muhaha. No witnesses..but sir there children ...i repeat no witnesses. Meh no biggie i guess.
9222910
Except she doesn’t use the force and her horn glows when using magic.
Remember that she is in the city. There are people hiding in the buildings. She doesn’t know if civilians were watching her but she wasn’t taking any chances.
9222979
No no what i was saying is most people would associate her telekinesis automatically as her using the force people know about jedis they don't know magic ....as long as she sticks to tk and doesnt do beam blasts or teleport ....not many know about force lightning so beams cant be associated to the force.....plus the mandalorians had a giant war against the jedis before the jedi layed down the whoop ass on them ...and it glowing can just be associated a quirk of her race its not like theirs another unicorn around to say it isnt the force ....or would they even care to answer if asked they are supremacists after all. Hymn .... it would make her a bounty hit by deathwatch the mandalorian old guard .. they detest jedi and if they think shes one it could get real bad for her. That'd be a good reason to keep it hush hush but could open up more action sequences as they try to take out the percieved jedi. She did tk them to the ground you could have a commando in the shadows see it... pros and cons i guess.
Oh yah before i forget glad to see the story continue im really enjoying it .... throm reminds me off a older lelouch from code geass. Need more .... MOOOORE.... im in need of my throm fix man.
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Considering the Empire’s propaganda, people would know the hands of force users do not glow when they use the force.
The closest people can think of is she’s a Dathomir Witch, but even those with some knowledge of them know she’s not a Dathomir Witch.
And who’s Throm? Do you mean Thrawn?
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Sorry my bad yes thrawn dont know why i keep calling him throm for some reason.... lol shes a new species no one knows anything about her period ...she could pee lemonade and poop ice cream her glowing if shes *holds finger bunny ears up and wiggles them up and down* using the force *wink wink* isn't that weird of a species trait. Give her a light saber or 4 to finish the image no one would even ask questions... probably... except real sith or jedi.
9223163
Exactly, Sith and Jedi would tell she’s not one of them obviously. There are Jedi among the Rebels and there are Sith among the Imperials.
Also, it might cause a panic too. She’s the only member of her species they knew. Many would think everyone in her species can use magic like her and it would cause panic.
Knowledge of her power must be kept at the minimum to avoid panic and unnecessary attention.
9223196
I agree with you don't get me wrong real jedi or sith will know immediately.... you gonna go the grey jedi route for them ... yah spike would make a bad ass sith and twi could make a good jedi but ... i cant picture spike going total dark and twi could go empress twilight when palpatine and the equestrian counsel is nixed.
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My lips are sealed. I’m not saying what will happen.
Well, at least I now know why I couldn't find a story I was looking for. Title got changed
Thanks for the update, waiting for more
I feel conflicted. Cool seeing these winning but at the expense of characters we like
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Don’t worry, not everyone’s gonna die. It would be dumb to kill every beloved character.
Highly risky to kill a beloved character in the first place, but I know which ones are expendable.
Btw, big fan of the Original Trilogy characters and I’m a big fan of Mark Hamill and Harrison Ford (mainly because of the other movies and shows they’ve been in).
There’s your insurance.
Now that is great chapter ending the battle in high note.
Spike and Twilight did there best with SCAR Squad for eliminating Mandalorian forces and completing there mission as all Rebel resistance are dead including Counselor Wren. The fight with Kreel and Kryze was very glorious and it almost end in a stalemate but wit Kreel's sneaky and unexpected move, the Commando of Mandalor is captured and defeated.
I agree that this is truly a turning point for the war as the Rebels. With the big loss of Mandalore the Rebels morale has gone done and Admiral Thrawn has now a stepping stone for his views to become to reality along with the officer, soldiers and crew under him along with the help Twilight and Spike.
And Admiral Immodet is opening his eyes for the first time to rethink everything he knew.
You did an amazing job for making the chapter and I appreciate that you give us a story that we can thrill and enjoy. I know your facing tremendous hardships in your health and personal life, but as fan of yours and everyone else that enjoyed your stories we still support you now matter what. And you are not alone with the hardships of life because we go through it and nothing can change it. I know that is wishful thinking but we have to move on with our lives and you shouldn't lose hope for it. Take your time with friends and enjoy life, because you are not alone for the pursuit of happiness.
Thank you again for the chapter.
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You sir are very welcome. And thank you.
9223886
I initially was gonna have Thrawn, Niriz, or Kreel be Twilight’s next mentor, but then I realized that won’t be a big part of the story so I changed it.
Ah, another wonderful chapter. It's always exciting seeing this in my favorites list with an update, very rarely does anyone writing Star Wars fanfics, be them crossover or not, has such a masterful knowledge of the Star Wars Expanded Universe.
Still wondering, though, if the Zann Consortium will ever make an appearance in this. Between Thrawn's rivalry with Tyber Zann, and the fact of Zann's ship suppliers from Mandal Hypernautics, it'd feel kind of empty to not have them here, even if just briefly mentioned...
Why is this soo awesom?! I Love it!!
9224273
That wasn’t just a mention, it’s a hint of one of the things to come.
Why you gotta bring the Emu War up. We already get enough shame from it, lol.
9224390
There is no shame. The Americans were defeated by weather when they invaded Canada and the same for the French and the Germans when they invaded the Soviets.
Then there’s also this
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operation_Cottage
Not every day do you go to fight an enemy only to lose soldiers to friendly fire and a mine when the enemy isn’t even there.
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Oof. True though.
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At least we didn't lose to birds.
I loved seeing the Nemesis Gunship in this. Those don't get enough love.
Wonderfull Chapter! Can't wait to see whats going to happens next!
P.S: I shamefully had to look what a Nemesis Class Gunship was, because I never played the game it was in. now i try to image how the Rebels here were fucked by this Beast! Ouch!
This is an amazing chapter I can only imagine that next chapter we get a look at celestial forces or what they have been up to this intire time.
Can’t wait for the next update.
Ps. Is there a possibility of twi coming in command of her own ship or having a high rank in the Hand or the over all empire, more so the Hand if I’m correct about Thrawns over all plans.
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Literally anything is possible in my fics, but my lips are sealed.
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A being of mystery, I like that, I await the next chapter and who knows my theory my be right :3
Love this fic. Can’t wait for the next one
What armour does twi have? What does it look like
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Like other non-Humans who are humanoid, Shadow Trooper armor without the helmet. Hers has holes on the back to accommodate her wings and the emblem of the Empire of the Hand is on the right breastplate.
Don't say "I repeat" just repeat it again. An extremely common mistake propagated by Hollywood.
Oh you don't know the half of it, it was EMU! Emu meat is surprising tasty by the way.
I noticed a reference to a certain modeler by the name of FractalSponge. He has made many star wars legends ships.
I KNOW. I think by this point Equestria would not actively searching an entire galaxy just to kill one person.