“Nothing important. Report on the new planet with the shattered moon?”
“Things went well on the negotiating table. They chose autonomy but will be under our protection. We believe this planet was once used for research by scientists of the Eternal Empire. I’m leaving a scientific team and a flotilla while I explore more planets. Star Charts should be updated soon with this planet designated Remnant.”
This was not a crossover I was expecting...
Unknown to the rest of the kids, they passed a piece of the Star Destroying leaning on a tree. I black lettering, the piece of durasteel had the words “Vector”.
Oh. Oh no...
Once the door closed behind Mohc, green flames engulfed Dorst and the Human was then turned into a Changeling.
Oh fuck. I'm assuming they're not an Alliance Rebel.
YES, WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Time To get to stompin those ungratful git'z Boyz, and den dere is dah Vector!?!?!?!? Holy Gork and Mork that's bad newz dere, and we needz more dakka for dat planet eh!!!
Since Remnant and RWBY is a thing in this story can I ask that you to make it the cliché of Jaune being abandoned by his friends after his transcripts are discovered. He leaves with Twilight and SCAR Squad, much to the regret and guilt of his former friends. Jaune and Twilight connect and bond over the fact that they where both abandoned by friends and family. They end up getting into some alcohol and the next morning they both wake up in the same bed both naked and Twilight having a soreness in between her legs. It was... Awkward to say the least.
9958149 No, I grew tired of the whole Jaune getting betrayed schtick.
And Remnant will only make one more appearance in a future chapter. Other than that, there will be a prequel to this fic but it won’t have MLP content so it’ll be in Fanfiction.
But if you make her stupid as well as evil then, my friend, you commit the same mistake that folks decry Disney of doing to the Empire and the First Order.
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee im enjoying this story so fucking much. A bit disappointed in myself for being late, but at least fashionably late works eh?
Unknown to the rest of the kids, they passed a piece of the Star Destroying leaning on a tree. I black lettering, the piece of durasteel had the words “Vector”.
NOPE. NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! someone call in base delta zero NOW!
Oh dear, multiple crossovers always confuse me. I struggle enough keeping up with one!
“You sly dog, you tried to get me as I was monologuing!” Loor said laughing. He ignored the painful groans from the rookie who was clutching his stomach. “Good attempt, but not good enough.”
Always a problem.
“I admit, you’ve got guts to be here Tano.”
How deep does this go?!
I dunno'. It seems a bit cynical that the Mane 6 were all won over by money and power.
Unknown to the rest of the kids, they passed a piece of the Star Destroying leaning on a tree. I black lettering, the piece of durasteel had the words “Vector”.
Oh Smeg!
Well...I dunno' who's side I'm on. On one hand, Celestia clearly wasn't doing the right thing... But I'm not sure Twilight was either. It sounded like the Mane 6 had legitimate reason to hold a grudge. I'm wondering if more could have been accomplished if Twilight took the very same position Thrawn takes in the Empire. Subtly manipulating things on the sidelines to ensure things steadily turn towards a better future.
Still enjoying the story and looking forward to seeing the two giants clash.
Finally finished it. Its a great story so far. I was expecting a cringe crossover story and man, I'm glad you proved me wrong. And the mix of the other crossovers was well done, not too much nor too little, so that's another plus. Maybe the only complaint is the upload schedule, but I'll live through it. Overall, great world building and character development, keep up the good work.
really bummed that the mane 5 knew...I wish they were like most blind to what happened..so what they heck changed them and the princesses that didn't hit Twilight.
9996803 that doesn't work for the mane 5 at all. Rarity herself is Generosity..sorry man you HAVE to come up with better reasons for all of this..way to OOC
“Things went well on the negotiating table. They chose autonomy but will be under our protection. We believe this planet was once used for research by scientists of the Eternal Empire. I’m leaving a scientific team and a flotilla while I explore more planets. Star Charts should be updated soon with this planet designated Remnant.”
I am laughing so hard right now... X)
Also...I really hoping twilight would inform vader about the death/slave camps
Also for the Lambda shuttles, can’t really say what they typically wear since the Crimson Empire comic on the first issue I believe showed Lambda pilots using TIE pilot uniforms.
As for Twilight not identifying Humans as Chiss sub-species, that was oversight on my part.
So you handed Cely her ass by the Eternal Empire, waking her from the Celestial Alliance collective delusions. Yet you throw this at us, if Twilight can't fix that mess soon...
10039652 Return of the Jedi showed the shuttle pilots in Black officers uniforms.
Likely it’s mainly a canon error. Star Wars is rife with them as much of the material was made up on the fly by Lucas. Combined with ample amounts of Legends material it’s bound mistakes will appear.
Perhaps it could be explained away as the Officers uniform was for special missions and the TIE uniform was typical duty wear.
The Vector, where have i heard that name before? Hmm?...wait...oh, oh no, oh god no...did you really...? Oh god no. lord have mercy on there souls.
This was not a crossover I was expecting...
Oh. Oh no...
Oh fuck. I'm assuming they're not an Alliance Rebel.
YES, WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Time To get to stompin those ungratful git'z Boyz, and den dere is dah Vector!?!?!?!? Holy Gork and Mork that's bad newz dere, and we needz more dakka for dat planet eh!!!
Epic and really awesome chapter.
👍
Since Remnant and RWBY is a thing in this story can I ask that you to make it the cliché of Jaune being abandoned by his friends after his transcripts are discovered. He leaves with Twilight and SCAR Squad, much to the regret and guilt of his former friends. Jaune and Twilight connect and bond over the fact that they where both abandoned by friends and family. They end up getting into some alcohol and the next morning they both wake up in the same bed both naked and Twilight having a soreness in between her legs. It was... Awkward to say the least.
9958149
No, I grew tired of the whole Jaune getting betrayed schtick.
And Remnant will only make one more appearance in a future chapter. Other than that, there will be a prequel to this fic but it won’t have MLP content so it’ll be in Fanfiction.
The sacrifices Twilight and Spike made saves live's for everyone against the Alliance tyranny.
9847564
What are you talking about?
Where are those Stormtroopers from?
9958866
Who, SCAR Squad? They’re a group of Spec Ops Stormtroopers from the comics in the Disney-verse.
Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee im enjoying this story so fucking much. A bit disappointed in myself for being late, but at least fashionably late works eh?
Vector....... Oh no...
NOPE. NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! someone call in base delta zero NOW!
Oh dear, multiple crossovers always confuse me.
I struggle enough keeping up with one!
Always a problem.
How deep does this go?!
I dunno'. It seems a bit cynical that the Mane 6 were all won over by money and power.
Oh Smeg!
Well...I dunno' who's side I'm on.
On one hand, Celestia clearly wasn't doing the right thing...
But I'm not sure Twilight was either. It sounded like the Mane 6 had legitimate reason to hold a grudge.
I'm wondering if more could have been accomplished if Twilight took the very same position Thrawn takes in the Empire. Subtly manipulating things on the sidelines to ensure things steadily turn towards a better future.
Still enjoying the story and looking forward to seeing the two giants clash.
Finally finished it. Its a great story so far. I was expecting a cringe crossover story and man, I'm glad you proved me wrong. And the mix of the other crossovers was well done, not too much nor too little, so that's another plus. Maybe the only complaint is the upload schedule, but I'll live through it. Overall, great world building and character development, keep up the good work.
9973688
School and work takes up a lot of my time. Plus, my attention is divided between 2 fics.
9973737
No its fine, as long as you keep it alive. If you need an editor, I'll be free. All I do is work, game,
masterbaitand sleep.9973766
Thank you but I have to decline. Only way for me to be interested in getting an editor and taking things seriously is if I get paid for this.
9973814
Man if only. Make some pocket change on the side.
really bummed that the mane 5 knew...I wish they were like most blind to what happened..so what they heck changed them and the princesses that didn't hit Twilight.
This is the biggest flaw of the whole story.
9996740
For the Mane 5, I was going for money and power
For the Princesses, having to live through a brutal Grysk invasion, the fear that every other alien species will do the same.
9996803
that doesn't work for the mane 5 at all. Rarity herself is Generosity..sorry man you HAVE to come up with better reasons for all of this..way to OOC
9996859
I really don’t aside that their families were affected by the Grysk invasion as well.
I am laughing so hard right now... X)
Also...I really hoping twilight would inform vader about the death/slave camps
10039589
Fuck Disney.
Also for the Lambda shuttles, can’t really say what they typically wear since the Crimson Empire comic on the first issue I believe showed Lambda pilots using TIE pilot uniforms.
As for Twilight not identifying Humans as Chiss sub-species, that was oversight on my part.
So you handed Cely her ass by the Eternal Empire, waking her from the Celestial Alliance collective delusions. Yet you throw this at us, if Twilight can't fix that mess soon...
heads will roll
New photo cool
10039652
Return of the Jedi showed the shuttle pilots in Black officers uniforms.
Likely it’s mainly a canon error. Star Wars is rife with them as much of the material was made up on the fly by Lucas. Combined with ample amounts of Legends material it’s bound mistakes will appear.
Perhaps it could be explained away as the Officers uniform was for special missions and the TIE uniform was typical duty wear.
What's with the vector yo you can't just go zombie apocalypse on us.
10715115
It was for a future chapter but after a long decision, I’ve decided to cancel both of my longfics here because of school.
Reason why I didn’t list them as cancelled is because I’m going to post a summary of what is suppose to happen in both fics and what I had planned.