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Relenting to her more mature self, Rainbow Dash joins the Equestrian Royal Army. Not all is well in Equestria though, important questions wait to be asked, with answers that many do not want to hear... How will our heroine play into all of this, and how will she help shape the Equestria of the future with her new friends?

I would also like to add a little something for the reader. If you enjoy my writing and like or favorite the story, or hate it and thumbs down, let me know why in the comments. This is the first fanfic I've ever written, so if you have an opinion on the writing, I'd appreciate the feedback.

EDIT: Changed this to teen just in case since I hadn't really considered foul language as a factor. Not that this is going to be a festival of f-bombs or derogatory terms or anything, the occasional curse or insult is thrown out though, so I'm covering all my bases.

Oh hey, and now that nice cover art from before has been changed to something absolutely dreadful that I sat down for a few hours and made myself. +1 for original art though?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 13 )

Angel's Calling - Sabaton

Because posting Aces High by Iron Maiden would be too easy.

This is gonna be SO AWESOME :rainbowkiss:
Your writing is impeccable, sir.

DAT ENDING
GOT ME
...
THUMBS UP AND FAVORITED
LETS SEE WHERE THIS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOES

dun dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN

AHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
WOOOOOOOO
UPDATE IS WIIIIIIIIIIIIN
great job

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH
AN UPDATE
SLEEP IS OVERATED ANYWAY

I kept writing. And writing. And there was a little bit more writing after that. So now the chapter is three times longer than the original goal I set, and none of you folks decided to stop me. Heh.

Great chapter Crazed. If you want to make them longer and longer i will not complain. :rainbowlaugh:

By the way, I always forget to thank people for any likes and faves I get, I'm a little too 'let the good people go about their day, they don't want to hear from you' minded. So, yeah. Thanks to everyone who has read Aces High and enjoyed it!

Comment posted by PonyExMachina deleted Aug 25th, 2013

Hey, just wanted to let you know I like the story.

Wow, this first chapter... such a good set up, I was just gonna read this chapter tonight and come back later but I think I'll stay and finish it, very intrigued.

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