This Hearth's Warming is going to a wonderful time this year, even more so for a certain pegasus pony, who was out looking for the perfect gift, for a certain classy stallion.
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SleepingPegasus
Greetings everyone. I am your friendly neighborhood midnight pegasus. Short story/one-shot writer. Hit me up if you have any pairs you want to see. I tend to do holiday themed stories.
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Whooves is the same way in my MLP story, he gets mixed up with Christmas and Hearths Warming a lot XD
Great story. 😄
You know I love looking for nice little Doctor/Derpy fics but almost always have a hard time. They are either horribly written and out of character or they make the doctor Time Turner the normal pony. My only complaints about this is the doctor's dialog was a tad off in two places and I am guessing you have Dinky as Derpy's sister in this fic rather than a daughter.
You did a really good job on this and I really enjoyed it despite the brevity.
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For critique help, where are the two parts?
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This one is pretty close it In character but the phrase "hang out sometime" and "If that's okay with you" seemed just slightly off though there is a good chance that's just me being weird.
The word Sweet doesn't quite fit, something like fantastic or marvelous feels like it would work better.
But really overall you did great both in quality of writing and character representation.