1043198 lol dude wow just wow

i was listening to this song at the end here

1045263 boondock saints nice

1045318
thats what thunder,silver,gambit,twilight,pinkie deserve i cant wait till i get there

1048319 are you talking about the prayer or what happened to them

1049358
what do you think why would i want that to happen to them i think they should have a fuckin holiday after those guys

1050470 hmm thats a good idea maybe in the sequel

1050503
you know what really sucks like me reading the chapter were they all die i was listening to the dead island trailer song it was NOT helpful

1065042 check out the sequel only one chapter right now but its in progress

oh, here comes the water slide MANTEARS!!! you continue this story, I rate it a 8 out of 10 overall (FINAL RATE)

1065069 The Hero's Children is the sequel

1065063 Really, GOOD I'l gladly read it, got to say you ain't the shit people usually recomend me, you on the otherhoof are the good shit that actualy smells like flowers so I'l recomend you to a few people who are looking for a good story

1065124 thanks dude

1065131
looks like you have a fan

My gawd, that is a huge story... -Cracks knuckles- alright I told you I would help out and give my two bits. This might be in separate comments, usually I get stories that are just starting out, and it's a little easier then... But what the hay here goes nothing.

2120059 thanks bud