After the unfortunate passing of changeling queen chit the denizens of her dying hive must separate, and few know what to expect outside of the 'comforting' embrace of its long passages, this is the story of one, a tale involving love, loss and feelings our chitinous friend could never have believed could come from a food source.
Logic: a changeling does not have sexual organs and as such does not have a gender, the queen reproduces asexually by taking genetic information from love pools, and mixing it with its own, the information exists because the changelings randomised genetic code means love given to the hive is encoded in a way no other changeling has, this is then purified, bad genes leaving 3/4 of the time and good genes leaving 1/4 of the time, the queen then fertilises using this information, love is stored in a domesticated larvae named feta larvae, much like fat cells in the human body, and is shared using the known green love iquor you see in the show, this is drank, love is absorbed directly as a chemical all love giving animals make when love is needed, this chemical produces a similar green iquor in the changelings mouth, but this iquor is not as wanted as it is less refined than in the hive.
Why isn't that information about changelings not explained in the story itself?
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God, thanks for actually giving advice, I thought for sure no one would take the time. Honestly this whole thing was me randomly throwing words around until I got a story that was vaguely understandable
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God, im not very good at this am i
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Sorry i just really didnt know how to explain it otherwise, atleast half of that stuff isnt even true
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would you be interested in assistance??