In all honesty I sat up at 3:20 AM one night and decided "hey! Why not try this thing out?" I just wanna share my material with people and hope that they like it!
The former human known as Silver has attempted to throw his life away, but neither Luna nor his wife, Night Watch will tolerate this. He claims it was an impulse, but they will cure him of the deep breaks even if it means reassembling him from parts.
Queen Chrysalis has won! Canterlot has fallen to the Changeling army and there's no longer anybody who can stand in the way of her armies! One problem, though... the Queen isn't exactly in control anymore.
It's interesting, I'd like to see how you continue it, though I understand why Diplo's being obtuse. I think his name is the only thing that's going to bug me about the whole story but not so much it would prevent me from reading.
7978879 Thank you! Sorry for the late reply, I was busy the past two days; getting the garage cleaned out. But I really do appreciate the feedback. Is it alright if I ask what about his name bothers you? I figured I'd get something about it at some point.
It doesn't sound like a human's name really. I mean like I said it's not a point that would prevent me from reading, but ti sounds like some sort of confection or store rather than a person.
8734337 Haha, it won't be. Since I can actually focus on it now without having much to worry about at this time, I should have it done pretty soon. I already have 500 words in the next chapter. No spoilers from me, though.
Jajaja he is not so pretty anymore .... Diplo just won some mare points Hopefully celestia will be smarter than twilight especially if a foal was involved
Diplo sounds like a candy. Like icecream candy.
It's interesting, I'd like to see how you continue it, though I understand why Diplo's being obtuse. I think his name is the only thing that's going to bug me about the whole story but not so much it would prevent me from reading.
7978879 Thank you! Sorry for the late reply, I was busy the past two days; getting the garage cleaned out. But I really do appreciate the feedback. Is it alright if I ask what about his name bothers you? I figured I'd get something about it at some point.
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It doesn't sound like a human's name really. I mean like I said it's not a point that would prevent me from reading, but ti sounds like some sort of confection or store rather than a person.
http://public.media.smithsonianmag.com/legacy_blog/Rainbow-Ice-611.jpg <----Diplo
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Maybe, maybe not. You'll find out in the next chapter: Tensions Rising.
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Haha, it won't be. Since I can actually focus on it now without having much to worry about at this time, I should have it done pretty soon. I already have 500 words in the next chapter. No spoilers from me, though.
Jajaja he is not so pretty anymore
.... Diplo just won some mare points
Hopefully celestia will be smarter than twilight especially if a foal was involved