OK, so I call that starlight is gonna ship herself with starburst, Trixie is gonna become trixie^2. That Just leaves moondancer and sunset... I call sunset and twilight and moondancer and spike!
8050206 I considered that, but I didn't want to have to write a way out of that. And to have the effect be temporary, it was just as well to see that kind of dialogue directly from Daring Do.
8051661 If that's the only nit you have to pick then I will take that as a complement. I may have miss-written precisely how she arrived in the carefully arranges lettering scenario to allow it. But the technical accuracy of the board's layout wasn't really the point of the scene. In either case, it is possible. This video was what I based the scene on. Give it a watch and go back and re-read it and see if it matches up.
8071103 So isn't a Magical Battle Royale to the Death. But as you can plainly see, our girls aren't too fond of the rules. Also, they are fictional horses in a magical world of make-believe. cdn.meme.am/instances/59582627.jpg
Possessive forms: princess's (main form used by academics) The princess's golden hair.; princess' (main form used by newspapers) The princess' golden hair.
I've always felt that the latter was for plural possessive. For example, Celestia and Luna's castle. "The princess' castle."
In the end, a mare knows she can always love herself.
Or at least something close enough to herself to be mistaken for it on the wrong side of a magical portal.
So Sunset is pregnant and now we have two Trixies. It seems Twilight's train is derailing quite nicely, I must say.
XDXDXDXD
Twice the inconvenience! Yay!
the cover art gives me the impression i'm about to be murdered.
and now sunset is preggers
Starlight you bloody idiot! Now she's going to be pregnant isn't she? Well, there goes the light-hearted nature of this story.
Huh, I thought their reaction would be something like this:
Also, thought the Spike and Luna interaction was nice
OK, so I call that starlight is gonna ship herself with starburst, Trixie is gonna become trixie^2. That Just leaves moondancer and sunset... I call sunset and twilight and moondancer and spike!
Darn it, I was hoping Dash's near illiteracy would make Moondancer crack,
Moondancer: "I, the big nerd, am won! I am the greetest! Now I will return to Canterlot for no raisin!"
8050206 I considered that, but I didn't want to have to write a way out of that. And to have the effect be temporary, it was just as well to see that kind of dialogue directly from Daring Do.
8051661 If that's the only nit you have to pick then I will take that as a complement.
I may have miss-written precisely how she arrived in the carefully arranges lettering scenario to allow it. But the technical accuracy of the board's layout wasn't really the point of the scene. In either case, it is possible.
This video was what I based the scene on. Give it a watch and go back and re-read it and see if it matches up.
Then flip your desk.
Woah woah, everyone hold up! Why are half the comments about Sunset being pregnant? Did I miss something?
8063270 No. It's just a lot of this:
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8071103 So isn't a Magical Battle Royale to the Death.
But as you can plainly see, our girls aren't too fond of the rules.
Also, they are fictional horses in a magical world of make-believe.
cdn.meme.am/instances/59582627.jpg
*insert obvious and hopeless overused "the fun has been doubled"-joke here*
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I was just thinking about this one!
I'm curious what will happen next.
(I've got a feeling where this is going...)
Great story. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
8098610 After all that StarTrix shipping in the premier, you won't have to wait long.
8101594 yeah. kinda.
Pls no ded.
8386634 no ded.
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Fair enough. Mewes does make most things better.
Come on, man, I know you have a strong arm, man, but you gotta stop beatin' whilst you write, man. You gotta concentrate, man.
9478000 Fixed.
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Awesome.
I got one more too (Sorry, I'm not reading it all in one shot)
*Princess'
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Technically, either form is acceptable.
I've always felt that the latter was for plural possessive. For example, Celestia and Luna's castle.
"The princess' castle."
Calling it now: Foreshadowing.
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I'd beg to differ. To me that's singular posessive, and plural posessive would be:
Celestia and Luna's castle, it's The Princesses' castle.