Twilight Sparkle has created a new spell that will allow her to communicate with powerful unicorns of the past. However, shortly after performing the spell, ponies around town start to disappear. At first, Twilight brushes it off as nothing, but soon realizes that something strange is going around Ponyville. If she and her friends do not act quickly, all of Equestria may just vanish under the shadow of Doubt.
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Uh... What is this? What does this have to do with what the description said? This "chapter" is far too short. A real chapter should be at least five to ten times the length of this. Another point: What you've already written seems to be jumping straight to the middle. Don't you think you should set things up a bit first? Your summary says it starts with a spell Twilight cast, so shouldn't it start with that?
ah nuts, twilights opened a can of worms so to speak with that spell, oh well, wonder what other craziness this will bring
Twilight, this is all your fault! Why the fillies first though? Did the ghosts need hosts or something? Well, maybe we'll find out next chapter!
Panicking? This is not time to be panicking random pony! This is a time for action, a time for everyone to get the buck out of the town!
Typical Twilight, always trying to act so logical in a situation like this. I could see this story getting much darker, wonder who's next on the disappearing list...
Wow, getting pretty dark. At the end there... was that Discord? Who else would talk about chaos?! I knew it! He's going to be involved in this, especially since he's on the poster! This is a pretty good chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Much obliged my friend. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.
A battle chapter, pretty nice if you ask me! The violence really astounded me in this one. So, we have Doubt here. Any other demon ponies we should know about? Ugh, the suspense is killing me!
O_O You made me like Celestia... and killed her?! You monster!
Nah, just kidding. One of the marks of a great author is their ability to sacrifice even their most loved and valuable characters, good show! So... what's happened to Discord? Now that Celestia's dead... could Luna take her place? Patience... patience... Can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm so glad to hear that. I was trying to make people like Celestia here, and it looks like I accomplished just that.
Next chapter, coming soon.
Well, this seems bad. REAL bad. So, what happened to Luna? And Discord? Looks like things are going to get epic
So... is it confirmed that the disappeared ponies all died? If it is...
Things aren't looking so good, is it? And to think, this all started so heart warming and joyful with Twilight learning a new spell. At least we know one thing: Doubt will be defeated. Only question is... how long would it take?