Edit: With the help of my new editor have the story been chaged at some points, it is advised to look over the story at certain points to make sure you have not missed something large.
The story begins a stormy winter evening, the Mane six is currently at Twilight's home when a pegasus crashes true her window, apperently having tried to cross true the heavy storm, being out cold he is taken care by the elements of Harmony.
The traveler soon joins in on the community, but he tends to keep to himself when not helping others.
He seems allways ready to flee town as soon as possible, but something seems to keep him from leaving, a shared question is why he left his hometown, and who or what is it that apperes to haunt his sleep close to every night.
Well i must thank the one who liked the story, it gives me the will to keep on with this story, any form for reply to this story would be greatly appreciated....... please
RRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I can't finish your story due to all the misspellings and grammatical errors! Send it to me and I'll edit it for you. I've only read the first few paragraphs and it's driving me up the walls. Not to mention a few literary things I want to point out are driving a spike in my head as well. For one, when you're narrating, you don't just hand over information from out of nowhere. You, as the narrator, are simply the readers' five senses. You tell them what's in front of them. Just handing over the names of the ponies is a sure fire way of having them forgotten. The only reason it wouldn't here is because we know these ponies from the show. You can have the ponies respond to each other using their names so we can learn what they are, but you don't just say "this pony that happens to go by the name of *insert name*." It brings the attention of the reader away from the story and towards the ominous voice of the narrator.
I'm being serious about editing your story. I can't read it with all these errors, but it seems like it has potential.
1091287 You are right, after looking over the first page I realised the errors of my own speling....embarrasing really
...I am also greatful for your offer of editing it, as I don't really have the experience within the art of writing before, never really wroten one before now... 
I'll let you to it, as soon as I understand how
1091939Really, I've only ever played editor once for my now ex-girlfriend, and she stopped since she thought I was starting to take control of the story, which in hindsight, I think I was. But I've read TONS of stories as well as lots of very good books (not as many as Twilight, but a lot nonetheless
). I've also noticed a lot of differences between the good stuff and the bad stuff. Just letting you know what you might be getting yourself into.
As for sending me your chapters, just save them to a document, and I think you could attach it to a PM message. I'm not positive, but it might work out that way. If not, I'll PM you my Email address.
1092014>>1091961 I'm not sure its possible to attatch files to PMs, unless they are a picture, or a link or a youtube video (seriosly, a video but no a file
) or a quote.