Until Further notice this fic is cancelled due my current loss of interest in my OC that is featured in this story. (Note some of my villains may appear in other stories but not "TC")
Warning a small amount of gore but nothing too over the top.
Villains from another world gather together to conquer Equestria in hopes of using it as a base from which to launch attacks on their home world, and they gather old villains from Equestria as their allies in this war. Although the villain’s actions do not go by unnoticed as a hero from this other world goes to Equestria to combat these corrupted forces, but can he work with the Equestrians and their allies or are they all destined to fail and fall to these corrupted forces.
New friendships made while old ones are strengthen, with new friends come new enemies as well.
This is my first fanfiction, so please keep the criticism polite. I'll also feature links the the ref sheets of my OCs in the Author's notes. Enjoy :)
Interesting concept!
These are your own characters huh? Really Neat! I saw them on the Devianart links you posted! (You can defiantly draw better than I can!!)
There are some minor spelling errors, nothing too bad, but I like the way the story is headed!! TC can turn into Rift, right? Using the Necklace? Or are they two different creatures? And Chrysalis in the mix too?....*rubs hands together evilly*
Don't get discouraged if their aren't many viewers. People like long stories. Once you get rolling, you'll be suprised!! (When I published my GF crossover, I only got one comment on the first chapter and that made me super sad but after I published the rest, more and more people began to like, follow, and comment! I'm not kidding I jumped up and down on my bed doing the happy dance)
Keep it up!
- 78% Pone
7815165 So TC has an amulet called the Omega-Helix which allows him to transform his species to that of any other sentient species he has encountered. "Rift" is the code name TC gave to his inter-dimensional form. I'll include a link to the Omega-Helix in this comment for you. Also thanks for reading the prologue
I'm still working on Chapter one but is coming along nicely. Although I might finish up some more ref sheets before posting the next chapter. I hope you have a marry Christmas and a happy New Year.
Omega-Helix Ref sheet Link: http://megamasterking.deviantart.com/art/Omega-Helix-Amulet-finished-622011775
Ps if you want I can send you a link to all of TC alternate forms so you can see if you can guess which ones will appear and you'll have some idea of what each one can do before they appear in the story.
7816907 Sure!!!
Have a happy new year as well!
7816927 Here is a link to all of TC's transformations, but I should note that this list will grow and I'll put the ref sheets for any future transformations in this folder so check this link the odd time to see if any new ones have popped up.
http://megamasterking.deviantart.com/gallery/59696836/TC-Transformations