This was so cute! I love the feedback they give each other during the scene, and I like how you showed us Sip's nervousness and attentiveness. I look forward to reading more!
All great artists start with doodles. Wow you two, ever take a theater class? XD We literally did improve every week, *sigh* kids these days. Well that was a really good chapter, had a little bit of everything I think, can't wait to read more.
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8154975 You are very welcome. Watching these two grow into their roles and getting comfortable with eachother, awkwardness and all, just brings a smile to my face. I really hope the next update won't take another six months, but no rush. A story like this takes time. Especially when you are juggling other projects.
8155040 I do hope the next one will not be as long in the making (after all half of the wait for this one was taken by finishing The Rescue Service), but we'll see.
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already already This was nice and all, but I'm really looking forward to the morning after. I really want to see a master and pet just being casual with one another when they aren't being hardcore in a scene. Also, the George joke should have been elaborated on with expressing the desire to hug her and pet her and squeeze her. Probably would have been funnier that way.
This was nice and all, but I'm really looking forward to the morning after. I really want to see a master and pet just being casual with one another when they aren't being hardcore in a scene.
That's a nice wish -- but to show that we'd need a more settled couple than these two. Right now, at least, their relationship isn't even at a point yet where there is any morning after together. We can hope, though.
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It's not as much a standalone joke as a callback to the ending of the previous chapter.
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8156349 I will keep the suggestion in mind -- but I'm not much for presenting anything as the answer to "what dom and sub life is like when they're outside the society". In actual life there's couples who are perfectly egalitarian except for when they get into character for designated sexytimes, and there's 24/7 power exchanges, and everything in between. Likewise for CTS. The "in between" cases are probably the ones that would be most interesting from a storytelling point of view -- but still, every step on the scale is a valid one for couples who decide it's right for them, and the Clocktower aims to have room for them all.
I love these two. Such dorks. XD Even tho in general awkwardness in fiction is really hard for me to stomach, I smiled the entire way while reading this... even if I had to pause and facepalm a couple times. The way he deals with his inexperience here is adorable and all too relatable. George is a really adorable too and interesting to boot, you actually managed to insert a bit of mystery into this story. xD
I'm super happy this got updated, looking forward to more. Welp, there goes my rule about not commenting on porn ever...
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Alright so he's finally found a sub he feels comfortable around, helping her out in the process. Both just needing to realize the society is there to HELP them and so ASK for help. But, time to see if he pulls this off or something screws things up.
Dude, do not screw this up!
and when he looked back he could see a funny little smile play on her muzzle. He remembered her saying she hadn’t found any dom to claim her yet. Perhaps she was as proud to be led as he was to lead?
Exactly.
So do the Doms not get any courses on understanding their subs? That seems like a pretty important thing to go over, know what to expect, have some idea what drives them to better be able to do this with them. Or, did he just not really understand it and so not pay attention and was to afraid to ask questions?
And then she would know that he didn’t really have a destination, and was just parading her about for no reason. He couldn’t let that happen.
Yeah, helps to have a plan there buddy. Granted, as eager as she was to have a dom, this should be fun for her.. for a bit.. and well, you can just TALK ABOUT IT!
He gets so much right, the respect, the care, worrying about your Sub.. but he fails to grasp the all important aspect of communication.
he would need more experience and then pass some kind of test; he wasn’t sure yet how it worked.
At your rate, it's going to be quite some time.
But he remembered there was group of training rooms right by the top of the stairs. He could pretend they had been his goal all the time.
Hey at least he's improvising well. And, that would make a good first session. She's new at this, needs training, both of you do so, nice, private little get to know what the other likes session, win/win.
He desperately hoped he would be able to live up to that smile.
As eager as she is, and as much as you CARE about her and want to make your sub feel good, and just, the attention you give.... you're biggest issue there is being TO worried about it and making yourself screw up just out of nerves. I don't drink, I hate drunks, I hate alcohol, and I know it's forbidden in the Society for very good reasons.. but DAMN does he need a drink to calm him the hell down.
but Daring Do had taught him how important wings were to a pegasus’s sense of freedom. She wouldn’t feel properly trapped unless he did something about the wings.
It's official, daring Do is secret Bondage propaganda, introducing innocent young foals to the sick, twisted, kinky fun of tying ponies up.
So she's not Indiana Jones, she's Wonder Mare. (And yes, Wonder Woman was intended to do JUST that.)
He couldn’t possibly attempt to tie that up with rope, like Ahuizotl’s minions would routinely do without spending even half a paragraph on how. She would just end with a broken something.
Also didn't they have classes on how to safely restrain various ponies? You'd think wings would be a rather huge part of that,''
I'm just going to go with "They did and he just sucks at schooling" as the answer to all this. But they are delicate,but not THAT fragile, you are over doing things Sip, treating her TO much like glass. If all else fails... ASK!!!!!
He would have to read the instructions.
Wait wait wait.. one sec...
There was a copy of it standing on a work table,
THIS IS AWESOME! Seriously THIS is the sort of, bizarre, just real, touching, yet ridiculous, just, amazing stuff I love CTS for. That it has stuff like THIS, a bondage session, stopping so one of them can check the manual on how to properly tie the other up. It's hilarious, and yet, makes so much sense, and reminds that.. this IS all safe, consenting fun. That nopony is getting hurt at all just... yeah this is freaking AMAZING!
Also, wow.... I know I've brought up the 'Mentor' thing and well not to get into details but.. looks he is the one that needed Twilight as a Mentor, just to teach him the hell to learn things. Really, you are worried about not knowing how to do stuff.... learn about it.
Though I do love that, pretty much all his issues with not fitting in at CTS were self inflicted through just not thinking and using the resources he had to help himself.
At least the index was easy to use. He quickly found a page dedicated to options for wing restraints and scanned the names for something where the symbols promised it could be applied without prior practice and would have the right severity
And this further shows it, just the lengths the Society goes to to make this stuff idiot proof. To make ti as easy to use, as quick and simple to be safe, does SO MUCH work to keep things under control and safe and just.. I LOVE THIS STORY!
worried that she’d be bored with the wait.
And she probably things he's teasing her, letting her wait, worry about what he's going to do next, hearing him move around, do things, building anticipation... not knowing he's fumbling around trying to figure out what to do.
“Why are you doing this?” she asked, her voice a bit unsteady.
So, in character, or out of character? Likely in but, yeah as new as they are......
He almost answered that it was part of the scene, she had agreed to it herself, they were only roleplaying.
Let's be thankful for ponies needing their mouths to work on stuff. And yeah likely NOT the best thing to do....
That was fair. If only he had a story ready to give her.
Wow.. yeah, again, really needed to talk this out but, let's see what you can do.
Meanwhile he slid a hoof up along her tail and shook its end gently, hoping this would remind her of the safety bell tied to it in case she wasn’t just after a story.
Fair point and smart.. granted she likely really know that.. also she can talk. But props for thinking ahead. But he's really just stallion for time.
“I know my place, sir,”
This is just, at once.. so sweet, and so frustrating, and so cute, and so cringy, and so just.. SO MANY emotions and facets. He's trying his best, but overwhelmed, not thinking about the full context, but trying, she's so new she's also not sure, likely just as lost and hoping she's doing ti right.. just... this is so damn awkward to watch and yet so sweet and touching and fun at the same time. Damn this is good!
He knew how to use that one from his volunteer jobs.
That's it, star small... really you are over thinking this, making it out to big, to worried about not having a plan. Just do this, start small, do what feels right, just, go with the flow.
In fact he could rear up and take her right now if he wanted to, and she wouldn’t be able to resist, wouldn’t even use a safeword to stop him, he was almost sure.
Yup, but, why be so quick? Play this out, get you both excited, enjoy this, the Society isn't just about getting off, it's about this right here, the build up, for tension control trust, all of it. So yeah take your time and just.. enjoy. Hopefully he gets more into it and calmed down as they go.
He wanted to, if not own, then at least touch her mind before he got there.
And yeah, he really DOES get the core ideas, he just... is to self conscious, and to unsure and to lacking in self confidence to understand that he gets it, thinking there has to be more when no, it really IS that simple and he is overthinking it WAY to much which is what is causing his issues.
They like it when they can hope for a kinder master, the chief slaver had told him. That was him now.
Yup.. granted, how collar would tell you what kind of master she wants. Or, just you now, having talked about this. But, he is doing a great job and just, I love how caring and careful he, while really trying his hardest.
He had worried a bit about the taste of ear,
The utterly bizarre random things fics can break out that make perfect sense in context, and yet... are just so ridiculous to think exist.
“You – you won’t get away with this!” she gasped, suddenly defiant.
Ohhh, so she wants to be taken agsint her will and broken and used... that works.
“Who do you work for?”
All those novels are being put to use I see.
Shifting sides, he hit her other cheek to
Hmm, still not big on the whole 'hitting the face' thing. Granted, this seem like more a 'be very careful about it' area, slap to the cheek so, works, and I trust he'd be very careful not to hit to hard, still.. be damn careful there dude.
he couldn’t just pause everything to explain what he imagined had gone before the scene.
Yeah would kill the mood, but really... ah you've heard it already.
This was unmistakably a scream of pain.
Ohhhh boy, to far.. and that's not going to do good for him.... incoming freak out?
“St-staircase,” she whispered.
okay dude, don't fuck this up, remember what it means.....
He had promised her not to apologize if she used a safeword. It told him what to do, too: Slow down. Not stop.
There we go.. no he knows she can and will call him out on it if he goes to rough, he can keep going, worry less, know that she'll pull him back before going to far. And he's handling it right... he is learning.
. “When I tell you to beg, it goes ‘please do’.”
Yup he's starting to get into it, just going with things, letting it flow and enjoying it.. good good... keep it up.
The boner he was sure he’d had earlier had gone, lost in the stress of coming up with a story for her on the spot.
Ohhh boy, well got plenty of ways to stall for time and get things back into fun time. And nice detail, just again how stressful this can be and the issues of keeping it up.
“Stick – put your throbbing stallion-rod into me and fuck me like the cheap slut I am!”
It took all his strength not to burst out laughing. Fortunately she couldn’t see his desperate grimaces. He flailed in her general direction with the crop, hitting her somewhere.
I'm with him.. this is so hilariously awkward, and yet touching and endearing.
The erection growing under him hit something unfamiliar, which he realized was her side.
Well that should encourage her.
“Um, one?” she said uncertainly as he slowly pushed all the way in.
Hmmmm from a clop PoV this bit... ehhhh likely YMMV feels a bit to quick after all the build up to finally having her for his first entrance into her to be that rather anticlimactic and dull sounding.
His body took over, and when it was done he let himself flump down on her back
Again kind of.. not amazing from a clop PoV BUUUT, that isn't really the focus of the scene in the first place. So it does work. Though amazing clop with all the emotions would just be transcendent.
He was fairly sure he could declare the scene to be done now without being a failure. But he didn’t really want to – he wanted to keep doing things to the mare, to go on being important to her.
And she can call a stop anytime. But, given what we know, she's likely happy with this and excited and just as nervous as him. Also.. you do know you can hang out after this, become friends, do this again... wow he really needs to pay more attention and get an primer on social interaction.
Not only did he know she was safe – he knew she still knew she was here of her own free will and could stop him at any time.
Yup... it is just.. amazing, it helps cement the trust, the devotion, remind that it's all an act, that it's safe, keep that in mind while letting that knowledge let you go so much further. It is amazing, and he gets why. Also at least he paid attention in the important lessons.
I want everypony to see that you belong to me, from your muzzle to your pretty little snatch. Do you understand that?
Ohhhhh.. sexy, kinky and HAWT.. I really like this idea.
and he kissed her forehead
D'awwwwww... and like above, ti's these little touches of care, and love and trust that remind the audience it's all fun and game, it's all safe, consenting, just keeping that idea fresh that i love SO MUCH about CTS clop.
There was a cluster of aftercare rooms by the entrance to the slave market.
Good, very, VERY good.
“If that was a scene, I think we’re supposed to do aftercare.”
Yes. Now get in there and be adorable about it!
Should he ask her what she needed? Would she know?
YES! YES YOU SHOULD! This is your #1 problem.. NOT ASKING!
Where I couldn’t see and you dragged me around everywhere? That was really hot
Ohhh bit of an exhibitionist here. Also yes it was.
She blushed even harder than before and turned her face away, breathing heavily.
Dude you turned her on, TALK TO HER! Make a date, go with her, DO SOMETHING!
He wasn’t even fully sure how that worked for mares.
Sip, I love ya, you are a great character, you are so caring and so much great about you but... you can be a bucking clueless idiot at times.
Sip had no idea what was going on. “Yeah, sure.”
She's essentially hitting on you!
but then he saw the look on her face and concluded she was shaking with excitement rather than fear or discomfort.
Does the Society have remedial courses on basic interaction? he needs those.
Oh, right, he realized, clitoris..
Wow... you know what, make him go repeat ALL the basic classes, he really wasn't processing anything outside the safety word/bell stuff.
“With your, uh, throbbing stallion-rod.” She grinned puckishly.
Alright, dude, get the hint! Even I'm not THAT blind.
He had not ordered her to invite him in, this time.
Making it all the better, this isn't a session isn't play, isn't anything but two ponies enjoying each other, so enjoy it.
trying to recall whether ‘mare lying on her side, stallion upright’ was an official authorized position,
1.Likely. 2. Wow.. not even TWILIGHT is likely to be that worried about details like ths under these cicrucmstances.
Dude do you EVER need to get laid laid.... so go get laid.
The position didn’t allow him to make the bold forceful thrusts porn had taught him stallions were supposed to do,
Afterwards he lay on top of her, still hugging with his forelegs, trying to contain what had happened.
D'awwwwww.. that was so sweet, they may not have been technical virgins, but I'd think that comes close enough to a REAL first time for both of them.
She nodded. “It’s kind of why I’m here, in a way.”
KNEW IT! So, was that how RD got into the society as well?
the only way for Daring to reach the Lost Quarter of Camelistan without attracting troublesome attention had been to be captured by slave traders who marched her there, chained to a column of other unfortunates.
Wow.. yeah she is not even trying to hide it.
“Uh. Daring Do in the Mines of Mareia,
It must have worked while he wasn’t thinking about it, though he had never imagined aftercare would be like that.
Let's hope you learn your lesson from this! RELAX!!!
“Next time?” He hadn’t dared think about whether there would be one.
Dude, she talked about how hard it is for HER to find a Dom... and now all this bonding? of COURSE she'll want to hook up again.
but of course she’d want some time to try other doms too. It was her right, anyway – he couldn’t expect to get her for himself after just one scene.
Well try to, or just maybe busy IRL.
“Suppose I’ll be for sale at Honest Bram’s – you know where that is?”
Ohhh smart move.
“Look, it’s nothing personal, but I promised myself not to give out my details to the first dom I fall in with. I mean, I think you’re all right, but . . . I’d hate myself if I couldn’t even stick to that.”
Fair enough, keep some part of her to herself, not get to dragged in.. this does make sense and, very nice. Also just this whole thing ALL THE D'AWWWWWWWWWW
“Sounds fair,” he said. “Then I’ll just call you George.”
Just.. wow. He is still a huge dork.
So yeah that was adorable and glad he found a pony finally and just, YAY him, now maybe he will bucking RELAX! a bit and TALK TO PONIES!
Sip reminds me so much of myself -- eager but terrified to act, paralyzed by anxious catastrophizing thoughts that keep me from doing anything until... I do it.
It is never as terrible as I worried it would be (well, except for rock climbing), and then, it starts, and it goes well, and like Sip, I'm still terrified about doing the wrong thing and unsure of where to go even as I follow the flow of the moment. I am looking forward to the next chapter so much.
“Stick – put your throbbing stallion-rod into me and fuck me like the cheap slut I am! ”
HA!
“What I’m going to do now,” he explained while he worked, “is let your hooves free, and then we’re going for a walk. I want everypony to see that you belong to me, from your muzzle to your pretty little snatch. Do you understand that?”
I just got a shiver from that.
She laughed softly. “I think we did alright.”
You both did really good.
She turned back towards him, halfway to the door. “I’m Society Slave C-557,” she said carefully and sighed. “Look, it’s nothing personal, but I promised myself not to give out my details to the first dom I fall in with. I mean, I think you’re all right, but . . . I’d hate myself if I couldn’t even stick to that.” She looked worriedly back at him.
Understandable.
“Sounds fair,” he said. “Then I’ll just call you George.”
Really?! He was serious about calling her the?! I was so sure he was joking!
8187643 I'd probably act like him if I was in the clockwork society. to shy to try someing new not wunting it to blowup in my face. I'd probably try being a sub at some point as well.
Sip and C-557 are perfect foils for each other. (I refuse to call her that other thing, damnit~! Not mixing depressing Depression era novels with my cute clop reading.)
I think what works really well in this chapter is the chemistry between the two of them. We get to see two very different kinds of clop scenes, one 'in character' and one more relaxed, and we get to see some really cute interactions in both. I think they both are learning to embrace the built in silliness of it all, and the end product is to show just how cute the two of them are having fun together.
that was great. and its so good to see this story is still alive. I really like these two characters and can't wait to read more
This was so cute! I love the feedback they give each other during the scene, and I like how you showed us Sip's nervousness and attentiveness. I look forward to reading more!
All great artists start with doodles.
Wow you two, ever take a theater class? XD We literally did improve every week, *sigh* kids these days.
Well that was a really good chapter, had a little bit of everything I think, can't wait to read more.
Their inexperience is adorbs!!
That was probably the first time that my response to a clop scene was "awwww" That was pretty good.
For those of you too young to get the joke at the end:
Was the picture a request or a commission?
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Manifest doesn't take requests or commissions, but she does spontaneously draw art for Clocktower side stories she likes (and gets to see early enough).
OH WOW I HAD ALL BUT GIVEN UP HOPE FOR THIS STORY BUT I'M SO GLAD I DIDN'T AHHHHHHHH
8154975 You are very welcome. Watching these two grow into their roles and getting comfortable with eachother, awkwardness and all, just brings a smile to my face. I really hope the next update won't take another six months, but no rush. A story like this takes time. Especially when you are juggling other projects.
I'm so happy this story got updated. This chapter was a delight to read all the way through. Very well done.
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I do hope the next one will not be as long in the making (after all half of the wait for this one was taken by finishing The Rescue Service), but we'll see.
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Um, a 6-second cereal commercial? What's up with that?
Good update
It's great to see an other chapter of this story again, I was really looking forward to see more of this story again.
already already
This was nice and all, but I'm really looking forward to the morning after. I really want to see a master and pet just being casual with one another when they aren't being hardcore in a scene.
Also, the George joke should have been elaborated on with expressing the desire to hug her and pet her and squeeze her. Probably would have been funnier that way.
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That's a nice wish -- but to show that we'd need a more settled couple than these two. Right now, at least, their relationship isn't even at a point yet where there is any morning after together. We can hope, though.
It's not as much a standalone joke as a callback to the ending of the previous chapter.
8156312 Fair enough. I acknowledge these two are still starting off and need to get to know each other better. Although, what if they go seeking advice from a much more experienced couple (or set) who show them what dom and sub life is like when they're outside the society?
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I will keep the suggestion in mind -- but I'm not much for presenting anything as the answer to "what dom and sub life is like when they're outside the society". In actual life there's couples who are perfectly egalitarian except for when they get into character for designated sexytimes, and there's 24/7 power exchanges, and everything in between. Likewise for CTS. The "in between" cases are probably the ones that would be most interesting from a storytelling point of view -- but still, every step on the scale is a valid one for couples who decide it's right for them, and the Clocktower aims to have room for them all.
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The chapter was absolutely awesome, and the picture was really cute too. I can hardly wait to see more.
Oh my gosh this was delightful.
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I love these two. Such dorks. XD
Even tho in general awkwardness in fiction is really hard for me to stomach, I smiled the entire way while reading this... even if I had to pause and facepalm a couple times. The way he deals with his inexperience here is adorable and all too relatable. George is a really adorable too and interesting to boot, you actually managed to insert a bit of mystery into this story. xD
I'm super happy this got updated, looking forward to more.
Welp, there goes my rule about not commenting on porn ever...
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Thanks for those detailed long comments. I'm glad you like the story despite some misgivings along the way.
Replying point by point would probably be insufferably sprawling, but feel free to grab me in chat if there's something in particular you're like a response to.
Alright so he's finally found a sub he feels comfortable around, helping her out in the process. Both just needing to realize the society is there to HELP them and so ASK for help. But, time to see if he pulls this off or something screws things up.
Dude, do not screw this up!
Exactly.
So do the Doms not get any courses on understanding their subs? That seems like a pretty important thing to go over, know what to expect, have some idea what drives them to better be able to do this with them. Or, did he just not really understand it and so not pay attention and was to afraid to ask questions?
Yeah, helps to have a plan there buddy. Granted, as eager as she was to have a dom, this should be fun for her.. for a bit.. and well, you can just TALK ABOUT IT!
He gets so much right, the respect, the care, worrying about your Sub.. but he fails to grasp the all important aspect of communication.
At your rate, it's going to be quite some time.
Hey at least he's improvising well. And, that would make a good first session. She's new at this, needs training, both of you do so, nice, private little get to know what the other likes session, win/win.
As eager as she is, and as much as you CARE about her and want to make your sub feel good, and just, the attention you give.... you're biggest issue there is being TO worried about it and making yourself screw up just out of nerves. I don't drink, I hate drunks, I hate alcohol, and I know it's forbidden in the Society for very good reasons.. but DAMN does he need a drink to calm him the hell down.
It's official, daring Do is secret Bondage propaganda, introducing innocent young foals to the sick, twisted, kinky fun of tying ponies up.
So she's not Indiana Jones, she's Wonder Mare. (And yes, Wonder Woman was intended to do JUST that.)
Also didn't they have classes on how to safely restrain various ponies? You'd think wings would be a rather huge part of that,''
I'm just going to go with "They did and he just sucks at schooling" as the answer to all this. But they are delicate,but not THAT fragile, you are over doing things Sip, treating her TO much like glass. If all else fails... ASK!!!!!
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THIS IS AWESOME! Seriously THIS is the sort of, bizarre, just real, touching, yet ridiculous, just, amazing stuff I love CTS for. That it has stuff like THIS, a bondage session, stopping so one of them can check the manual on how to properly tie the other up. It's hilarious, and yet, makes so much sense, and reminds that.. this IS all safe, consenting fun. That nopony is getting hurt at all just... yeah this is freaking AMAZING!
Also, wow.... I know I've brought up the 'Mentor' thing and well not to get into details but.. looks he is the one that needed Twilight as a Mentor, just to teach him the hell to learn things. Really, you are worried about not knowing how to do stuff.... learn about it.
Though I do love that, pretty much all his issues with not fitting in at CTS were self inflicted through just not thinking and using the resources he had to help himself.
And this further shows it, just the lengths the Society goes to to make this stuff idiot proof. To make ti as easy to use, as quick and simple to be safe, does SO MUCH work to keep things under control and safe and just.. I LOVE THIS STORY!
And she probably things he's teasing her, letting her wait, worry about what he's going to do next, hearing him move around, do things, building anticipation... not knowing he's fumbling around trying to figure out what to do.
So, in character, or out of character? Likely in but, yeah as new as they are......
Let's be thankful for ponies needing their mouths to work on stuff. And yeah likely NOT the best thing to do....
Wow.. yeah, again, really needed to talk this out but, let's see what you can do.
Fair point and smart.. granted she likely really know that.. also she can talk. But props for thinking ahead. But he's really just stallion for time.
This is just, at once.. so sweet, and so frustrating, and so cute, and so cringy, and so just.. SO MANY emotions and facets. He's trying his best, but overwhelmed, not thinking about the full context, but trying, she's so new she's also not sure, likely just as lost and hoping she's doing ti right.. just... this is so damn awkward to watch and yet so sweet and touching and fun at the same time. Damn this is good!
That's it, star small... really you are over thinking this, making it out to big, to worried about not having a plan. Just do this, start small, do what feels right, just, go with the flow.
Yup, but, why be so quick? Play this out, get you both excited, enjoy this, the Society isn't just about getting off, it's about this right here, the build up, for tension control trust, all of it. So yeah take your time and just.. enjoy. Hopefully he gets more into it and calmed down as they go.
And yeah, he really DOES get the core ideas, he just... is to self conscious, and to unsure and to lacking in self confidence to understand that he gets it, thinking there has to be more when no, it really IS that simple and he is overthinking it WAY to much which is what is causing his issues.
Yup.. granted, how collar would tell you what kind of master she wants. Or, just you now, having talked about this. But, he is doing a great job and just, I love how caring and careful he, while really trying his hardest.
The utterly bizarre random things fics can break out that make perfect sense in context, and yet... are just so ridiculous to think exist.
Ohhh, so she wants to be taken agsint her will and broken and used... that works.
All those novels are being put to use I see.
Hmm, still not big on the whole 'hitting the face' thing. Granted, this seem like more a 'be very careful about it' area, slap to the cheek so, works, and I trust he'd be very careful not to hit to hard, still.. be damn careful there dude.
Yeah would kill the mood, but really... ah you've heard it already.
Ohhhh boy, to far.. and that's not going to do good for him.... incoming freak out?
okay dude, don't fuck this up, remember what it means.....
There we go.. no he knows she can and will call him out on it if he goes to rough, he can keep going, worry less, know that she'll pull him back before going to far. And he's handling it right... he is learning.
Yup he's starting to get into it, just going with things, letting it flow and enjoying it.. good good... keep it up.
Ohhh boy, well got plenty of ways to stall for time and get things back into fun time. And nice detail, just again how stressful this can be and the issues of keeping it up.
I'm with him.. this is so hilariously awkward, and yet touching and endearing.
Well that should encourage her.
Hmmmm from a clop PoV this bit... ehhhh likely YMMV feels a bit to quick after all the build up to finally having her for his first entrance into her to be that rather anticlimactic and dull sounding.
Again kind of.. not amazing from a clop PoV BUUUT, that isn't really the focus of the scene in the first place. So it does work. Though amazing clop with all the emotions would just be transcendent.
And she can call a stop anytime. But, given what we know, she's likely happy with this and excited and just as nervous as him. Also.. you do know you can hang out after this, become friends, do this again... wow he really needs to pay more attention and get an primer on social interaction.
Yup... it is just.. amazing, it helps cement the trust, the devotion, remind that it's all an act, that it's safe, keep that in mind while letting that knowledge let you go so much further. It is amazing, and he gets why. Also at least he paid attention in the important lessons.
Ohhhhh.. sexy, kinky and HAWT.. I really like this idea.
D'awwwwww... and like above, ti's these little touches of care, and love and trust that remind the audience it's all fun and game, it's all safe, consenting, just keeping that idea fresh that i love SO MUCH about CTS clop.
Good, very, VERY good.
Yes. Now get in there and be adorable about it!
YES! YES YOU SHOULD! This is your #1 problem.. NOT ASKING!
Ohhh bit of an exhibitionist here. Also yes it was.
Dude you turned her on, TALK TO HER! Make a date, go with her, DO SOMETHING!
Sip, I love ya, you are a great character, you are so caring and so much great about you but... you can be a bucking clueless idiot at times.
She's essentially hitting on you!
Does the Society have remedial courses on basic interaction? he needs those.
Wow... you know what, make him go repeat ALL the basic classes, he really wasn't processing anything outside the safety word/bell stuff.
Alright, dude, get the hint! Even I'm not THAT blind.
Making it all the better, this isn't a session isn't play, isn't anything but two ponies enjoying each other, so enjoy it.
1.Likely.
2. Wow.. not even TWILIGHT is likely to be that worried about details like ths under these cicrucmstances.
Dude do you EVER need to get laid laid.... so go get laid.
D'awwwwww.. that was so sweet, they may not have been technical virgins, but I'd think that comes close enough to a REAL first time for both of them.
KNEW IT! So, was that how RD got into the society as well?
Wow.. yeah she is not even trying to hide it.
Let's hope you learn your lesson from this! RELAX!!!
Dude, she talked about how hard it is for HER to find a Dom... and now all this bonding? of COURSE she'll want to hook up again.
Well try to, or just maybe busy IRL.
Ohhh smart move.
Fair enough, keep some part of her to herself, not get to dragged in.. this does make sense and, very nice. Also just this whole thing ALL THE D'AWWWWWWWWWW
Just.. wow. He is still a huge dork.
So yeah that was adorable and glad he found a pony finally and just, YAY him, now maybe he will bucking RELAX! a bit and TALK TO PONIES!
But yeah can't wait for more.
Sip reminds me so much of myself -- eager but terrified to act, paralyzed by anxious catastrophizing thoughts that keep me from doing anything until... I do it.
It is never as terrible as I worried it would be (well, except for rock climbing), and then, it starts, and it goes well, and like Sip, I'm still terrified about doing the wrong thing and unsure of where to go even as I follow the flow of the moment. I am looking forward to the next chapter so much.
HA!
I just got a shiver from that.
You both did really good.
Understandable.
Really?! He was serious about calling her the?! I was so sure he was joking!
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I'd probably act like him if I was in the clockwork society. to shy to try someing new not wunting it to blowup in my face. I'd probably try being a sub at some point as well.
Sip and C-557 are perfect foils for each other. (I refuse to call her that other thing, damnit~! Not mixing depressing Depression era novels with my cute clop reading.)
I think what works really well in this chapter is the chemistry between the two of them. We get to see two very different kinds of clop scenes, one 'in character' and one more relaxed, and we get to see some really cute interactions in both. I think they both are learning to embrace the built in silliness of it all, and the end product is to show just how cute the two of them are having fun together.
I can't beleive he actually did that. Bucking noob.