These two are so good together, it's positively adorable. And Sip's already noticeably more comfortable. From her perspective, it might seem like he has owned other mares in the past week.
On a side note, this mare seems to be giving him mixed signals. Her collar says she doesn't want anything outside the dom/sub play, but her attitude in the aftercare rooms combined with that kiss speak otherwise. I wonder what the chances are that she'll change her collar.
This was a great chapter, It was good to see their relation of Sub and Dom growing with each other. I liked how they he tries to keep every thing safe for her and mange to keep it sun for her too. For what I can see the dom is more about creating the experience for the Sub in the scenario that he plan for her. Very interesting. Can't wait to see more of this soon.
He lost himself briefly in the warmth and strength of her embrace. It was only a hug, but somehow, in a way he couldn’t explain, it still felt even more intimate than coupling with her earlier had. He wasn’t in a mind to question it, though, as long as it continued.
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“No no no, that’s not what I – I mean it was hot but –” He forced himself to breathe. “I liked doing it, you see? But if you only let me do it for my sake, then . . . it has to be something you want . Otherwise it’s just . . . horrible.” He remembered the picture of Beating Heart’s beat-up marefriend, so long ago.
The "George" joke was funny once, but having that be her name in this chapter just broke everything for me. Please don't use it again. There a "rule of threes" for a reason. And we're easily at 5 or 6.
Wow. You're quite the tightrope walker as an author. You've created such a wonderful and immersive scene, but at the same time you've sprinkled it with all sorts of details that built the world itself.
It's a perfect 'show, don't tell'. By giving us a wealth of details into how Sip constructs their scene together, and getting his inner thoughts about what is and is not working, we really get a sense of verisimilitude, while also emphasizing the core values the CTS stands for.
These two are so good together, it's positively adorable. And Sip's already noticeably more comfortable. From her perspective, it might seem like he has owned other mares in the past week.
On a side note, this mare seems to be giving him mixed signals. Her collar says she doesn't want anything outside the dom/sub play, but her attitude in the aftercare rooms combined with that kiss speak otherwise. I wonder what the chances are that she'll change her collar.
Another excellent chapter. I really like these two characters. I can't wait to see where this story will go X3
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Thank you.
As for your side note, I should not comment at the current time. .
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Thanks.
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That's ok. I don't want you to spoil the story. I just like trying to read between the lines.
This was a great chapter, It was good to see their relation of Sub and Dom growing with each other. I liked how they he tries to keep every thing safe for her and mange to keep it sun for her too. For what I can see the dom is more about creating the experience for the Sub in the scenario that he plan for her. Very interesting. Can't wait to see more of this soon.
Came for the porn, stayed for the romance.
It's going to be a romance right...? Tell me he's not going to sell her away at some point
Another lovely chapter in this amazing story! I look forward to whatever comes next.
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Yes, that's one of the points I have in mind here.
Have to say, this has been a very well written chapter!
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Thank you!
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You're a good pony Sip...you're a good pony.
The "George" joke was funny once, but having that be her name in this chapter just broke everything for me. Please don't use it again. There a "rule of threes" for a reason. And we're easily at 5 or 6.
Wow. You're quite the tightrope walker as an author. You've created such a wonderful and immersive scene, but at the same time you've sprinkled it with all sorts of details that built the world itself.
It's a perfect 'show, don't tell'. By giving us a wealth of details into how Sip constructs their scene together, and getting his inner thoughts about what is and is not working, we really get a sense of verisimilitude, while also emphasizing the core values the CTS stands for.