8624097 But to what extent? will they grow much bigger? will they start producing?
Any unknown variable in an unexpected side-effect is adverse by default for simply being an unknown variable. Until there can be research and confirmation, it will remain classified as adverse. After confirmation, it will simply be a side-effect, and the views of positive/negative will be entirely subjective.
8624243 I will remind you, this is a fetish fic based on things growing bigger, and bigger is always better. So I don't call it 'adverse' if Apple Bloom is able to 'share the wealth' so to speak.
8624297 Again, it only remains adverse until further understanding, at which point it becomes subjective. I am ALWAYS in favour of going bigger, but it's not enough to shut off the analytical side of my brain.
First off one issue is that your chapters don't have titles. With smaller stories this isn't an issue but with larger stories it makes it pretty hard to keep track of.
Glad you enjoyed it. I will admit if I wasn't in a financial situation right now, i had entertained the idea of showing a picture of Applebloom and Coral Leaf, standing next to Gentle Bounty and Chestnut. I've often wanted to show just how enormois Gentle is mext to AB. :P
In a sense, that would be the 'easy way out' to their predicaments.
Plus, the concept of the story is to accept others for how they are. The chapter with Coral and the CMC at the swimming hole I feel is a great example of that: he's 'exposed' and feels he looks like a freak, but the CMC may playfully tease him, but aren't the kind to heap insults on differences like DT and SS do on Applebloom.
And that was also something that some of the FiM episodes had as a theme, that it's about who you are on the inside. Like Dragon Quest, where even though Spike is a dragon, it is who he was raised as, that makes him who he is.
Plus, the story has one of the concepts that intrigues me about size, when a character is out-sized or abnormal in a 'normal' world, how does that world accommodate them?
You know, I’ve wished for a while that there was a short/medium range summary of each chapter. I’ve been coming (ha) back to this story every once in a while ever since you were at chapter 7 and writing chapter 8, but I’ve only ever read parts of some of the chapters. While I get the gist and still enjoy the parts I’ve read fully, I don’t really have the time to invest into thoroughly reading the whole thing, and I feel like I’m missing out on interesting side-plots (again, ha).
I know this was a super long drawn-out comment just to say I’m lazy and don’t have time to read the whole thing but I ask, is there a summary of each chapter that exists? If there is and I haven’t seen it, I’m sorry I am blind, please link it. If there isn’t, would anyone make one?
If this is a stupid comment then please delete it. I hope I don’t come off as rude or anything.
sweetie and scoot have ample bosoms?
i enjoyed this
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Regular consumption of Apple Family Dairy products having an adverse effect on other females?
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Adverse? What's so bad about gaining a couple cup sizes? So long as they can still move under their own power, they'll be fine.
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But to what extent? will they grow much bigger? will they start producing?
Any unknown variable in an unexpected side-effect is adverse by default for simply being an unknown variable.
Until there can be research and confirmation, it will remain classified as adverse.
After confirmation, it will simply be a side-effect, and the views of positive/negative will be entirely subjective.
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I will remind you, this is a fetish fic based on things growing bigger, and bigger is always better. So I don't call it 'adverse' if Apple Bloom is able to 'share the wealth' so to speak.
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Again, it only remains adverse until further understanding, at which point it becomes subjective.
I am ALWAYS in favour of going bigger, but it's not enough to shut off the analytical side of my brain.
It was a great story and i'm looking forward to see more great stories and chapters from you! ^_^
First off one issue is that your chapters don't have titles. With smaller stories this isn't an issue but with larger stories it makes it pretty hard to keep track of.
Still planning on a second epilogue?
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I have toyed with a few places I could go, but nothing has really struck me as being fully-formed in a new story idea.
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I think I can understand that.
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Glad you enjoyed it. I will admit if I wasn't in a financial situation right now, i had entertained the idea of showing a picture of Applebloom and Coral Leaf, standing next to Gentle Bounty and Chestnut. I've often wanted to show just how enormois Gentle is mext to AB. :P
Beautiful way to wrap up this epic story of yours. "All is well."
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In a sense, that would be the 'easy way out' to their predicaments.
Plus, the concept of the story is to accept others for how they are. The chapter with Coral and the CMC at the swimming hole I feel is a great example of that: he's 'exposed' and feels he looks like a freak, but the CMC may playfully tease him, but aren't the kind to heap insults on differences like DT and SS do on Applebloom.
And that was also something that some of the FiM episodes had as a theme, that it's about who you are on the inside. Like Dragon Quest, where even though Spike is a dragon, it is who he was raised as, that makes him who he is.
Plus, the story has one of the concepts that intrigues me about size, when a character is out-sized or abnormal in a 'normal' world, how does that world accommodate them?
No offence to the art sitly or u but god damn them tits gonna give her back problems at age 20
You know, I’ve wished for a while that there was a short/medium range summary of each chapter. I’ve been coming (ha) back to this story every once in a while ever since you were at chapter 7 and writing chapter 8, but I’ve only ever read parts of some of the chapters. While I get the gist and still enjoy the parts I’ve read fully, I don’t really have the time to invest into thoroughly reading the whole thing, and I feel like I’m missing out on interesting side-plots (again, ha).
I know this was a super long drawn-out comment just to say I’m lazy and don’t have time to read the whole thing but I ask, is there a summary of each chapter that exists? If there is and I haven’t seen it, I’m sorry I am blind, please link it. If there isn’t, would anyone make one?
If this is a stupid comment then please delete it. I hope I don’t come off as rude or anything.
Really love the story regardless :)