Ohh man! Really enjoyed this one aswell! I really like how CL and AB are growing as a couple its sweet cute and absolutely awesome! Keep them comming i'm very excited to see how the next chapter will look like :)
While I do enjoy this story, I have to bring up something that's been bothering me for a while, after I went back and looked at the drawings that inspired this story I think that Applebloom is too calm about things especially after learning about Coral Leaf's mother.
I don't expect outright depression but the implications here, especially with the most recent image (as of this writing) where they talk about having built a stall or barn for Applebloom to be housed and milked, are that Applebloom is going to become an immobilized milkmare once her breasts start lactating. Applebloom is smart and I think that, at some point, she has to acknowledge the consequences that she's essentially on the road to becoming a paraplegic, being weighed down by her breasts and unable to move around without assistance, either from other ponies or machines. The Crusaders even now are physically active and running around having fun and I can't imagine that the idea that Applebloom is going to be immobilized and more or less confined to one room for the rest of her life can be something she's not worried about or even thinking about, this should start getting to her after a while.
I know this is supposed to be a romance story, and it's a good one, but I think a dose of realism and maybe attempting to seek a solution would be welcome. I can't recall if they ever mentioned they saw a doctor in previous chapters but with medical technology in Equestria seeming roughly on par with our own I think Applebloom and Coral Leaf should see a doctor about their conditions, and maybe even seek a way to stop it before it cripples them. I can't consider it an ideal ending for the series if Applebloom gets pinned to the floor by her breasts and gets stuck in the barn for the rest of her life, made little more than livestock for her family. Even if they still treat her as a pony emotionally, physically they will be treating her as livestock, to be regularly milked and her production sold off, food being brought out to her regularly and maybe being bred by Coral Leaf. It's just too sad for me to consider that a happy ending.
I know I'm going to receive some flak for this but I needed to say it.
Ohh man! Really enjoyed this one aswell! I really like how CL and AB are growing as a couple its sweet cute and absolutely awesome! Keep them comming i'm very excited to see how the next chapter will look like :)
Awesome chapter my friend and I can't wait for the next upload for this story I'll be waiting my friend and keep me posted on the story thanks
Awsome story cant wait for next chapter
While I do enjoy this story, I have to bring up something that's been bothering me for a while, after I went back and looked at the drawings that inspired this story I think that Applebloom is too calm about things especially after learning about Coral Leaf's mother.
I don't expect outright depression but the implications here, especially with the most recent image (as of this writing) where they talk about having built a stall or barn for Applebloom to be housed and milked, are that Applebloom is going to become an immobilized milkmare once her breasts start lactating. Applebloom is smart and I think that, at some point, she has to acknowledge the consequences that she's essentially on the road to becoming a paraplegic, being weighed down by her breasts and unable to move around without assistance, either from other ponies or machines. The Crusaders even now are physically active and running around having fun and I can't imagine that the idea that Applebloom is going to be immobilized and more or less confined to one room for the rest of her life can be something she's not worried about or even thinking about, this should start getting to her after a while.
I know this is supposed to be a romance story, and it's a good one, but I think a dose of realism and maybe attempting to seek a solution would be welcome. I can't recall if they ever mentioned they saw a doctor in previous chapters but with medical technology in Equestria seeming roughly on par with our own I think Applebloom and Coral Leaf should see a doctor about their conditions, and maybe even seek a way to stop it before it cripples them. I can't consider it an ideal ending for the series if Applebloom gets pinned to the floor by her breasts and gets stuck in the barn for the rest of her life, made little more than livestock for her family. Even if they still treat her as a pony emotionally, physically they will be treating her as livestock, to be regularly milked and her production sold off, food being brought out to her regularly and maybe being bred by Coral Leaf. It's just too sad for me to consider that a happy ending.
I know I'm going to receive some flak for this but I needed to say it.
Are writing more chapter(s)? And when will Applebloom lactate or what?
when will chapter 7 come