Nice, though there are instances where you miss use the word pony. For example when you refer the the girls as ponies and Coral as a stallion, ponies refers to both male and female. I think the word you're looking for when referring to the girls is mare. There are quite a few instances where you should have called the girls mares instead of ponies since you were clearly trying to be gender specific with them.
Really fun read! Liking the tension built in the Botique!
Oh Rarity's reaction!.. That's how I see if everyone sees it for the first time.
greate chapter cant wait for the next one
Great Chapter. Very Funny. Though I am honestly surprised Rarity didn't jump on his log.:rarity wink:
(By the way...link to the comic?)
Nice, though there are instances where you miss use the word pony. For example when you refer the the girls as ponies and Coral as a stallion, ponies refers to both male and female. I think the word you're looking for when referring to the girls is mare. There are quite a few instances where you should have called the girls mares instead of ponies since you were clearly trying to be gender specific with them.