Lol, what if Gentle's milk makes AJ start growing herself? XD And she just starts selling milk? There gonna be alot of busty mares around if that happens.
Yes, great to see that not only is all forgiven and Aploom and Coral getting reunited, now they're getting married! Really hope they write to Coral's parents about wedding, course getting his immobile mother to the wedding will kinda be an issue. Hope there's a few more chapters left, I'm really gonna miss this story when it's over.
Pretty funny and also kinda clever Coral using Applebloom's cleavage as a hiding spot from Applejack. Wonder what other kind of big boobed shinanigans will ensue.
*squeels like a 6 year old girl* So happy for them, i LOVE shere this has gone. This is hands down my favorite story, i was excited for chapter 12 and i got caught up in a project im doing i forgot to check up on it and i was like "chapter 12 and maybe 13 is out...HOLY MOLLY CHAPTER 14." lets just say i was more than excited to stay up until 1:31 AM and 3% battery life to reread the begeninng and the new chapters. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
Ya know...i usually come to fimfiction to read ranchy stuff and hoof one out...but your work has made me actually stop and read cause man is this a good story ^^ keep up the good work. Now...just a little idea, mabey you could write one about spike starting a "growth" spurt if ya know what i mean :3
"your work has made me actually stop and read cause man is this a good story."
And that, was the purpose behind the story, to enfold the expansion stuff within a story you could get behind.
After this concludes, I may take a breather (been writing this for over a year!), before embarking on another fimfic story. There's a few other ideas I am considering, one with a concept I have never seen explored.
I was angling a bit for Applejack in the episode Bridle Gossip, where she wasn't as open-minded about new things. Plus, I could see her being a bit more apprehensive about Coral Leaf after the barn dance (after all, it's not normal when the hired help starts humping against your little sister in the middle of a fancy party, then the two of them just swell up in certain areas, and coat everyone in milk and cum!).
And there are times in the show, where AB can be stubborn and not listen to reason (like in the early Applebuck Season ep). We got into that a bit in the chapters before Coral left, where he tried to calmly explain himself or things, and she wouldn't listen to reason.
However, as we've seen in the last few chapters, AJ managed to gain a clearer perspective on things. And, she's allowed Coral and Applebloom to come together. I was surprised that what I thought wasn't a big deal regarding AB, really incensed a number of people.
Lol, what if Gentle's milk makes AJ start growing herself? XD And she just starts selling milk? There gonna be alot of busty mares around if that happens.
cant wait for the next chapter
Yes, great to see that not only is all forgiven and Aploom and Coral getting reunited, now they're getting married! Really hope they write to Coral's parents about wedding, course getting his immobile mother to the wedding will kinda be an issue. Hope there's a few more chapters left, I'm really gonna miss this story when it's over.
Pretty funny and also kinda clever Coral using Applebloom's cleavage as a hiding spot from Applejack. Wonder what other kind of big boobed shinanigans will ensue.
I'm happy for them that they are going to be married! :)
*squeels like a 6 year old girl* So happy for them, i LOVE shere this has gone. This is hands down my favorite story, i was excited for chapter 12 and i got caught up in a project im doing i forgot to check up on it and i was like "chapter 12 and maybe 13 is out...HOLY MOLLY CHAPTER 14." lets just say i was more than excited to stay up until 1:31 AM and 3% battery life to reread the begeninng and the new chapters. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
Ya know...i usually come to fimfiction to read ranchy stuff and hoof one out...but your work has made me actually stop and read cause man is this a good story ^^ keep up the good work. Now...just a little idea, mabey you could write one about spike starting a "growth" spurt if ya know what i mean :3
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"your work has made me actually stop and read cause man is this a good story."
And that, was the purpose behind the story, to enfold the expansion stuff within a story you could get behind.
After this concludes, I may take a breather (been writing this for over a year!), before embarking on another fimfic story. There's a few other ideas I am considering, one with a concept I have never seen explored.
Big sister doesnt equal big bitch, so whats up with applejack in this story?
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I was angling a bit for Applejack in the episode Bridle Gossip, where she wasn't as open-minded about new things. Plus, I could see her being a bit more apprehensive about Coral Leaf after the barn dance (after all, it's not normal when the hired help starts humping against your little sister in the middle of a fancy party, then the two of them just swell up in certain areas, and coat everyone in milk and cum!).
And there are times in the show, where AB can be stubborn and not listen to reason (like in the early Applebuck Season ep). We got into that a bit in the chapters before Coral left, where he tried to calmly explain himself or things, and she wouldn't listen to reason.
However, as we've seen in the last few chapters, AJ managed to gain a clearer perspective on things. And, she's allowed Coral and Applebloom to come together. I was surprised that what I thought wasn't a big deal regarding AB, really incensed a number of people.