oh my its the Flim Flam Brothers i smell trouble....
hmmm maybe the trouble they might bring to Applejack will be a chance for Coral to get back on her good side or maybe making her realize her error for being so stubborn if Coral gets her out of whatever trouble the Flim Flam Brothers brings on her.
Great Chapter! Applejack is taking this way too personally and I hope something happens soon. I have an inkling that the Flim and Flam will have something in mind for Apple Bloom...
The phrase "from bad to worse" was made for situations like this. Sadly you have fallen into the trap of turning AJ in to an antagonist by flanderizing her character into just being stubborn and traditional especially since AJ is deliberately avoiding Applebloom just to prevent her from speaking her mind so Applejack won't have to face the consequences of her actions, plus using her sister's new crippled state of life to keep her locked up like a spinster.
I'd hoped this chapter would turn things around but it made things worse and quite intolerable, and the addition of Flim and Flam promises to turn things even farther down the deep end, I see kidnapping or shady deals that force Applejack to give Flim and Flam her little sister because they still "won" the contest years ago and are going to enforce the legally binding contract.
And I must again reiterate, Applebloom is much too calm about this, her just being upset at her sister and not being able to be with Coral is too mild for what's going on here, again becoming a parapeligic isn't something someone should have almost no reaction to.
Also, while cougar rarity is amusing I hate to say this but I'd be much more interested in seeing her get together with Coral than AJ now, hell have her offer to hire him once AJ blows it so he sticks around and maybe falls for Rarity in some way.
Watching Applebloom go insane with pleasure from the pressure building in her breasts, and Applejack being forced to milk her for the rest of her days... I hope!
"N-no, Ah was wrong. Yer... Yer just a cow, Applebloom. Only good for making milk. So Ah'm gonna grow you. Grow you until you can't grow no more."
Edit:
Also, a great alternate ending, would be if Flim and Flam make Applebloom's milk addictive and growth-inducing, using Applejack as their first test subject. I'd love to see the stubborn farm girl succumb to to the overwhelming pleasure of being a milk factory-- and start treating Applebloom as a tool for more growth.
Boy, really does feel like Coral has reached his lowest point. At this point Applejack may as well have put a restraining order on him against Applebloom. Now he has that final strike dangling just over his head.
Starting to hate how AJ is acting right now. I feel it won't be long before her stubbornness drives her sister away.
oh my its the Flim Flam Brothers i smell trouble....
hmmm maybe the trouble they might bring to Applejack will be a chance for Coral to get back on her good side or maybe making her realize her error for being so stubborn if Coral gets her out of whatever trouble the Flim Flam Brothers brings on her.
Great Chapter! Applejack is taking this way too personally and I hope something happens soon. I have an inkling that the Flim and Flam will have something in mind for Apple Bloom...
Jesus.. Applejack is SO unfair! I actually got very pissed at her! Ugh..
The phrase "from bad to worse" was made for situations like this. Sadly you have fallen into the trap of turning AJ in to an antagonist by flanderizing her character into just being stubborn and traditional especially since AJ is deliberately avoiding Applebloom just to prevent her from speaking her mind so Applejack won't have to face the consequences of her actions, plus using her sister's new crippled state of life to keep her locked up like a spinster.
I'd hoped this chapter would turn things around but it made things worse and quite intolerable, and the addition of Flim and Flam promises to turn things even farther down the deep end, I see kidnapping or shady deals that force Applejack to give Flim and Flam her little sister because they still "won" the contest years ago and are going to enforce the legally binding contract.
And I must again reiterate, Applebloom is much too calm about this, her just being upset at her sister and not being able to be with Coral is too mild for what's going on here, again becoming a parapeligic isn't something someone should have almost no reaction to.
Also, while cougar rarity is amusing I hate to say this but I'd be much more interested in seeing her get together with Coral than AJ now, hell have her offer to hire him once AJ blows it so he sticks around and maybe falls for Rarity in some way.
But yeah, unwatch for me goodbye
I, for one, think this story is going fine!
Watching Applebloom go insane with pleasure from the pressure building in her breasts, and Applejack being forced to milk her for the rest of her days... I hope!
Edit:
Also, a great alternate ending, would be if Flim and Flam make Applebloom's milk addictive and growth-inducing, using Applejack as their first test subject. I'd love to see the stubborn farm girl succumb to to the overwhelming pleasure of being a milk factory-- and start treating Applebloom as a tool for more growth.
Boy, really does feel like Coral has reached his lowest point. At this point Applejack may as well have put a restraining order on him against Applebloom. Now he has that final strike dangling just over his head.