A Late-blooming Applebloom finds herself developing feelings for the Apple's new farmhand...who may be harboring a pretty big secret of his own.
A few grammar errors here and there so you may want to go over the chapter a little bit.
good luck with the next chapter
7813946
I'm just guessing, but I assume you're talking about some of how Applebloom talks.
If so, that's actually intentional.
Wuz tryin' to git down some of that country phrasin' like we hear on the show.
7814271 No not that. the seen before Applebloom falls from the tree is where on mistake was.made you mistakenly put 'Applejack' instead in a Applebloom. dialog
7814335
Ah, yeah. Was proof-reading and editing around 1 am, so my brain must have slipped (them apples all start to blend together after awhile).
Should be resolved now. :)
A few grammar errors here and there so you may want to go over the chapter a little bit.
good luck with the next chapter
7813946
I'm just guessing, but I assume you're talking about some of how Applebloom talks.
If so, that's actually intentional.
Wuz tryin' to git down some of that country phrasin' like we hear on the show.
7814271 No not that. the seen before Applebloom falls from the tree is where on mistake was.made you mistakenly put 'Applejack' instead in a Applebloom. dialog
7814335
Ah, yeah. Was proof-reading and editing around 1 am, so my brain must have slipped (them apples all start to blend together after awhile).
Should be resolved now. :)