It's like Inception, if Inception were about pony fetish porn and absurdist humor. Ok actually it's nothing like Inception at all.

Keep it up.

8172386 That is the best description ever. Can I quote you on that?

Here, poor Twilight gonna wake up to a soaked bed?

8172394
Sure

8173697 It's not my place to say. What happens in the bedroom, stays in the bedroom.

Maybe it's my demented idea of her becoming as large as she could possibly get, but for my pride's sake I don't think that's all. The constant rhyming that went on in this chapter, all in Spike's dialogue, made some of the more awkward bits much clearer; it all fit nicely. It was all tantalizing, especially with his growth throughout. All efforts at stopping were futile, as everything she did only added to it; I like how you use props in your stories, and this one's using of everything around her, as well as the detail of her spinning around, was very nice. I think combining the two sources of smoke, and their kissing afterwards, made it all the more engaging. I think it was just the way you dealt with the dragon magic, and how volatile it seemed, that really drew me in.

I should mention that you've used every other prop very nicely in the rest of your stories; this one just appealed to me the most so far. I think I should say that this, to me, is subjectively the best, my favorite, as it were. I am also a huge sucker for this particular phrase, and others like it:

As the first puffs of smoke sped towards Twilight, she didn’t even resist this time. She just opened her mouth and let the smoke fill her even further.

That sort of thing really gets me going.

Anywho, that's what I can offer. I should mention that you, in comparison to other writers I know, use props in your growth incredibly well, and I appreciate the effort you put into all of it. Keep it up (pleeeeeeeease)!

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8311003
There is no Dark tag on this one. Twilight is a bit scared, but the effect for the reader is supposed to be more silly than scary. As for the Sex tag, this is focused on fetishy bits rather than on actual sex, but mod policy requires me to add that tag anyway. Every chapter is basically an extended version of Twilight and Zecora reenacting this scene...
derpicdn.net/img/view/2012/12/29/196623__safe_screencap_applejack_spike_spike+at+your+service_animated_bellows_inflation_op+started+shit.gif
...with maybe some implications that Twilight is getting off on it.

(If you came here from One of Those Mornings—that one has fetishes I don’t normally write, so I don’t consider that one “canon” to Evil Expandtress.)

Absolutely love the story so far. And I can only imagine what Twilight's other five friends are dreaming about.

8321664
Thanks!

About everypony else’s dreams, to be honest, I’m working from the idea that there’s no external or supernatural cause for Twilight’s dream here. She has a fetish that she’s been in denial about for a bit, and she’s got some other emotional baggage, and that’s what caused her subconscious to create these bizarre scenarios. So all of her friends are having perfectly normal dreams tonight. And if any of those are erotic dreams, they probably don’t include inflation, because Twi’s friends probably all have different tastes and kinks. But, you know, Death Of The Author. Nothing in here ever touches on the other five ponies’ dreams, so you can imagine they’re whatever you like.

8322211
Well, I was half implying that they all have variations of the same kink. Would make for one hay of an awkward brunch.

Still thinking back on this story sometimes.
Most recently after a conversation ended up at "Mysterious Mare Do Swell". If you ever need another silly pun title...

.....................................

11596123
…………………………………………………………………………………

11596980
Is it dead?

11597008
Progress has slowed to an absolute crawl, but I haven’t completely given up yet.

11597479
Good to hear.