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Well....first criticism you are getting is you need to rewrite how you did the description. A lot of people will not read this with how you set it up.
Take a look at other fics to see how they set up theirs but basics is.
Description of story that gives people an idea of what its about.
Any notes of comments from you about the story under that.
First thing you want people to see is the story description.
Your English isn't too bad, so that's not really an issue
I must say that this is very interesting story but for me too short. But still pretty good
7626745 Thanks for the advice, man. Tried to redo the description as you recommended.
7630058 Thanks! And what about being short... Yeah, it's still a bit difficult for me to write in English properly. So this is more like a "firing range" for me -- you know, to test the skill. But I'll do a bigger story next time, I promise!
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I understand that you have some trobules with language. So do I! I will be patiently waiting for another story.
And seriously now. That story really asking for sequel by herself. Think about it!
