Humans.... the beasts of burden for the world of equis. once on par with the many other species, but now are simply slaves. or worse. This is how it has been for hundreds of years. but now, the 9th Legion of Rome appears. And they want answers.
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Winged Hussars when?
8197815 eh probably not for a while
I think it would be awesome if a modern marine squad would join, Not a full battalion or division, or even a platoon just a six man squad.
still can' wait for the vikings to arrive and kick ass. Since curabo are supposed to be there viction of vikings they can be recruited in their attack on equestria.
8197965 -.-
8198022 *sigh* how many times have I said I'm not adding anything in for awhile, especially Vikings (I'm not well read on Viking weapons tactics n history)
8197965
No
1. They would be overpowered
2. It's better to stick with around the same era.
Great choice in music and a awesom chapter.
Humans Rule!
8198046 I WILL NEVER GIVE IN WE ARE THE RESISTANCE!!!!.... also I think that you will like vikings if you need to attack places from the sea.
8198120 eh I prefer land based armies. Not terrably good with sea based ones or air, which is why I try to limit the pegassi in recent chapters so I don't have to think about it and push it until later
8198046 but i am and lets say they cab be really crafty if they have to ivar the boneless is a good example or why not the varangian guard they were basicly vikings employed as elie forces by the byzhantine empire
8198218 ps i even know vikings entered the berserker rage
8198218 one of the cool things about vikings was there were so good at sealing that they often got thousand of miles inland by the rivers and raided town close by. They really were able to screw with people.
8198059 It depends on WHEN the Byzantines come from but can be from HUNDREDS of years after Roman soldiers.
8198578 1. It's spelled sailing.
2: IM NOT ADDING THE FUCKING VIKINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!
So please stop asking for that for at least 1 more chapter
8198646 not very long after, only around 200 years after fall of west rome
8198651 Still, It's 2 centuries after the fall of Rome.
The only reason the humans keep winning is that Blueblood is IDIOTIC. There's no real stakes when your enemy is a moron. There's no sense of true danger, that they could really lose.
8198698 I'm sure they still have firsthand accounts of things at that time
8198646
Doesn't matter.
That's too far into the future.
8198648 ..... another chapter. Soon we will revival ourselves. soon we will have our revenge.
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD! SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
Hah! Humans are victorious!
I know you have been asked this a bit too much, where people ask you to add a certain army, But maybe consider the Bedouin Army? My great grand father was the last legit Bedouin army soldier so I can probably give you some information on their fighting styles.
8200044 what's a beudoian
8200078 Nomadic Arabs who in the past successfully taken more than a half of the Byzantine Empire and annexed the entire Sassanid Empire 😅😅😅
8200091 hmmmm interesting..
8200095 Ye. So yea if you want any info on them, you can ask. A great example of their success is the Battle of Yarmouk, a battle between us and the Byzantines, while outnumbered we still won.
If you want to add a navy army, I highly sugest you add Croatians. Not very famous, but their ships were built so that they made little to no noise while sailing. They were experts at naval combat and excelled at capturing and sinking enemy ships by jumping onto them and killing the crew. They were also innovative enough to slap a giant balista onto the ship to sink them from afar. Pls 🤗🤗🤗
Awesome chapter I can't wait to see the next few!
How about instead of vikings you could have an entire army
from Carthage?
😑😑😏
How about something interesting like.. an army from one of the world wars.
8288561
Rule #1 of suggestions: no major uses of gunpowder.
8288644
Would love to see a few Assassins in here
8295086
I did add a Japanese army....
Fuck it I'll add ninjas
8295196
Well Assassins ("Not equal" sign) Ninjas.
8295196
Well Assassins ("Not equal" sign) Ninjas.
8295267
Ninjas were the assassins/spies for feudal Japan
Vikings are neat but I think that Carthaginians will be a better fit or you could add a army from medieval times with knights. Persians will be a nice choice to. It will be interesting to see how the Romans will interact with the Byzantines though when they hear what happened to the empire when they were gone. Also how about adding some slaves from Spartacus's army.
HUMANITY WILL RISE AGAIN!
8297186
Thanks for the input but you forgot one thing.
No Vikings.
I'm making that a rule now
8297035
But you already have japanese
I am thinking about either the 300 Spartans lead by King Leonidas or Maybe The Caroleans. I have read the no Major Usage of Gunpowder rule and I think it that the caroleans would be able to bypass these rule. Also maybe One of these two Armies?
I see people recommending quite a lot of armies, like the spartans and even spartacus and his gladiators, but just out of curiosity, have you tought of putting the knights of the templar order? They were the wealthiest group out there, with some of the best warriors in their ranks. They had to hide after being accused of heresy and took with them quite a lot of their treasures, that might be pretty useful for the armies trapped in equestria.
(deus vult)
8314448 I agree. What about the Ottoman army though.
8341237 gunpowder
I kinda want to see a For Honor like Centurion here. It would be funny to see one of them just leaving his scutum, run against the enemy and punch them right to Elysium (or heaven, depending of the time period)
You need to find an editor as you have too many mistakes such as spelling errors and run on sentences in this story. You also need to start a new paragraph anytime someone talks in conversation. Sometimes it becomes a bit too distracting and difficult to follow.
Otherwise, not a bad story.
8357299
I used to have an editor but not sure what happened to him
8359366
If you want I can edit your chapters. I'd like to see this story be successful as it has a lot of potential.
8370866
To be honest ive kinda lost intrest in this story, I made a mistake in adding to many armies early on and the whole story kinda not intresting to me anymore. Thinking of cancelling it or at least on haitus
8371023
Idk if you should be hasty there. I know you're already working on another project. This one has had me hooked so far. Many others would agree as well. The pacing may have been a bit fast, but it doesn't ruin the main story as much as you think. Regardless though, I'm still open to edit your chapters in any story. If it means helping you with a part of the load. Usually editing can cause someone to lose interest, especially in this site. I have a lot of free time to spare as I'm having my gap year. So I'm open to help.