Humans.... the beasts of burden for the world of equis. once on par with the many other species, but now are simply slaves. or worse. This is how it has been for hundreds of years. but now, the 9th Legion of Rome appears. And they want answers.
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Poor cunducter, he was in the wrong place at the wrong time. Anyway, good story, keep it up.
is it bad i keep on hoping that the dragonborn will come out of nowhere and RADA someone?
7876894 yes, cause it's not gonna happen
This is so good.
A tad bit too brutal and unnecessary what Seranchi did
7876930 I CAN DREAM!!!
7877170 just wanted to make sure that there won't be any straight good guys in this story, both sides are going to commit bad acts
7877589 ah, ok.....
both sides have their rotten and twisted ones, some mere soldiers, some decorated officers.... that fact rarely is any different in these kinda things, right?
7877599 indeed
I can see that you're not enjoying writing this story. Dude you dont need to force yourself into doing something YOU don't like. Do the things you would like to do.
7885700 the thing is i get into something, like it fora while, then lose intrest in it, and i wanted to commit to this story since i already have a bunch of poeple reading htis story. Plus i dont want to just abandon this story because i know of so many good stories that were cancelled/perminant haitus and i always wanted to continue reading them.
Seranchi step off the train to met his horse how gave him a deadpan stare
Horse: "sir can i ask you a question?"
Seranchi: "um ok..."
Horse: "did that ´pony´now what this metal carriage is?"
Seranchi: "yes"
Horse: "and way it was riding on these metal thing on the ground?"
Seranchi: "yes"
Horse: "and if there are more of those things, where thay come and where thay go?"
Seranchi: "um yes"
Horse: "so he was more use to us alive then dead?" while he lifts his right eyebrow
Seranchi: he´s eyes grow wide in realisations he muttered "dammit..."
7898136 you forget they can't just steal a train to ride into the next town, they don't know how it works and if the conductor would lead them
Into a trap
7898286 what i meant was, take him hostage (live the train behind) back to camp to get information so thay can raid more train and other villages and towns, then thay can kill him or whatever.
7898327 you forget the 'camp'
Is surrounded by equestrian forces
7898524 huh i fought that Seranchi would have a temporary camp to wait till Vesperianus plan would take effect, i wonder where he will take the useful lot from the train then?
I dislike you very much right now this a great one why did you cancel it
7952331 I didn't enjoy writing it anymore as I used to, the hype for writing my first story is all gone. Plus I got way over kyhead with starting this as my first story. I should've started with a 1 chapter short story.
Though I may take interest in it later though so if you see it suddenly go from
Cancelled to incomplete don't be too excited
7953005
Alright I understand the drop in motivation for writing I just wanted to know what happened peace
why the cancel?
8049556 lost interest in writing it.
8049921 NNNNOOOOOOOOOO
Please continue or at the very least transfer the story to another writer who will finish it. This story is interesting and I would like to see it finished.
8156163 ok fine I'll continue this just stop spamming the chat, also that's very good information
8156351 but 1 each chapter is fine