Humans.... the beasts of burden for the world of equis. once on par with the many other species, but now are simply slaves. or worse. This is how it has been for hundreds of years. but now, the 9th Legion of Rome appears. And they want answers.
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i vote to mount bluebloods head on a spike and send it back as a warning/gift
Blueblood about to get buttfucked
Yay!!! Another massacre is about to happen
7633494 I second that!
..........yeah no. The pones are fucked. Go Roman's!!!!
..........yeah no. The pones are fucked. Go Roman's!!!!
I hope that you talk a little bit more into this 'project' the Doctor is thinking of doing with the humans: I'm really interested in that. Also, through reading this story, I see that you're going around all the characters and giving the 'inside scoop' on their perspectives. That's fine as long as you go around all the characters that are involved in the runaround. I'm very interested on what the Romans are going to do with the captured guards. Unfortunately, I'll have to wait on that because it was not included in this new chapter; sad, I know.
This doesn't look like it's been rushed, but it is a short chapter. Might I recommend extending your chapters more in the future? Just a suggestion, bruh.
Anyway, I put my two cents in. Still a good story though!
The end word from Shining should be:
"I'll try to help, not sure if he will listen."
Great buildup so far. It would be cool to see the prisoners perspective on the humans and how they are being treated.
(Possible plot hole: are some of the guards captured unicorns? Why don't they just teleport out? Are they going to gather Intel?)
Everypony hate Blueblood that's why he got many votes wanted him dead . I hope Blueblood comeback alive what he reacts . LOL
7633662 thanks for the idea
7633549 I thought it was a good idea
7633659 I wasn't really gonna expand in the project, since I assumed poeple would know it's just testing things such as treatments and New drugs n stiff, but this gives me an idea....
Ave roma
Ave emperor
Roman's are going to kick ass.
also I think a certain battle in their history will be the inspiration.
for what's to come.
7634304 I wager a Teutoberg Forest except the Romans decide to be Arminius.
7634448 I may or may not take a few ideas from the Punic wars *cough cough* Hannibal *cough*
7634525 guards were cocky and untrained, romans were highly trained and had arrows to shoot down flyers
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But they're outnumbered and outclassed. Furthermore, it makes no sense for them to be enslaving humans who are SENTIENT, if the humans of Equestria can talk, it makes no sense. It's Tim Burton Planet of the Apes logic. It only works if the humans are STUPID and can't talk or the like, you've shot your premise in the foot. And don't tell me a guard in Canterlot doesn't undergo training, this world has things like hydras and magic users and Discord. They wouldn't just be dumb idiots who aren't smart enough to handle other warriors.
7635456 Well during the peak of slaves being transported from Africa, the justification is that they were an inferior race to the whites. Such is my logic in this Story, the fact that humans have no magic and thus are considered inferior to the ponies. Plus the aggressive nature of humans probably had them and the ponies fight for territory and recourse which the ponies would've won due to magic and the humans probably not being able to fight shield spells and magic blasts.
And for the fact that the romans won the battle, the guards in ponyville, as i mentioned before int he story and hinted at, were only there to quell any uprisings should they occur, they were not prepared to fight an organized well trained army. And definetly not trained to fight them. Not only that but when the Romans came close with their gladius' the long Halberd's of the guards were effectively useless at that close of a distance. I chose those weapons for a reason. And before you say "Well why didnt they use magic to blast them" Remember that ponyville is a majority earth pony town, so most of the local guards would be earth ponies. With the acception of a few who did put a shield spell on top of the guards to prevent arrows from raining down on them, they were vastly outnumbered by their earth pony counterparts. Not only that but in that one battle the ponies were outnumbered almost 2-1. With the 1000 Legionnaires along with around 1000 (Probably less due to the cavalry helping slaves escape) Auxiliaries.
Though i thank you for your insight on this. Keep it up and i hope you do catch me slip up so i can fix it.
I've been waiting for a story like this! keep it up
7634448 I think more like Watling Street those it's blue blood so Hannibal would work just as fine.
Grammar issues in this chapter
Well he fucked
Grammar. Capitalization. Punctuation. These are three things that need to be handled well in order to have a good, thrilling, and captivating story. I see none of these basic skills pulled off in this story.
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this was my first story. Used it as a learning tool. I try to improve. Thanks for the feedback.
Democracy without political responsibility, sweetie.