I Combined the first two chapters into a prologue chapter.

The tactics I felt that the romans executed were inaccurate. But, even though they suspected it as a trap, not much generals would think of following the trail to see where it leads. Plus, I think the "yes sir" should be replaced with a battle cry unique to their time. But, that's just a small suggestion from me

Enslaved humans though? That's unique in my book and sounds really good. I'm totally going to follow this story.

"Well, we know who one of the 'volunteers' for the spell is." a guard chuckled as he stepped out of the circle, staring daggers at the terrified human.

well, lets let the shitstorm commence, and have these slaver bastards die a painful death