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Chaotic Conundrums


Just a rookie pony writer. (and rookie writer in general)

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On the 2023rd year of the reign of the Royal Pony Sisters, a fleet of ships from the alien alliance known as "The Covenant" attacked Equestria. While the orbital defense grid and its crew fought valiantly, one cruiser managed to evade and is now hovering over the mega-city of New Manebasa. Reports so far indicate major damage and heavy casualties. While the last Spartan-II in service has been reported to be assisting the battle, the ENSC has organized Teams of Orbital Drop Shock Ponies, or ODSP to land on the carrier and capture or destroy it. Gunnery Sergeant Rainbow Dash has recruited four of her friends to help with the assault. If all goes well, this should be an easy mission...

Crossover with Halo 3 ODST, which is owned by Bungie.

For anyone who wishes to see all of Sadie's story since I'm skipping most of it, you can watch them all here.

August 22: Added title pun because why not.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 26 )

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Woo-hoo! First story has been approved! Guess I better get started on the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

809824 Thank you very much! I'm almost done the next chapter so it should be done at some point later today.

I've played this Campaign too many times so seeing how well you can make the dialogue into Pony form is awesome!

Keep it up!... Also: Fluttershy is best Rookie

Y1

It's amusing enough but I recognized half the lines in this from the game. Maybe you should try distancing yourself from the game a little bit more. If I wanted to re-watch the cut-scenes in ODST I'd just re-watch the cut-scenes in ODST.

i am loving this so far need moar but one question wheres pinkie pie

810048 I'll keep that in mind. I've already planned a bunch of extra dialogue as well as an extra character (no, not an OC), so I'm hoping that'll add enough variety.

810094 I don't wanna spoil too much, but rest assured pinkie WILL appear near the end. :pinkiehappy:

809936 Oh good, I'm not the only one who played it too much. It's still one of the better campaigns in my opinion. and Fluttershy is indeed best Rookie. thanks for the encouragement!

flluttershy rookie is best rookie

The cairo station to me sounded like a dead give away amd now i think i know.who pinkie represents

810690 Yeeeeeah, I guess I made that a bit too obvious. My bad.:facehoof:

810824 Yes, yes, I'll get to it ASAP. Dash's turn now...:rainbowdetermined2:

810907 its not a bad thing its ok to give some things away to make people curious

Chapter 3 done, though it took me a bit longer that I had hoped when I was trying to add more stuff to the story.

Fun fact: The griffin marine was originally going to be Gilda, but I had trouble writing her into the story. Sorry, Gilda fans.

This is good stuff! Now I can listen to Halo music and read about ponies at the same time! Yes, I did listen to the ODST soundtrack while reading these first two chapters, and I say it was definately a good way to spend a half hour of my evening. Well done. Please keep going with this.

Looking forward to seeing what happens when Rarity gets her hooves on a Scorpion.

"Sure, as long as I get to drive the tank!"

885501 No worries, I actually listened to the soundtrack while writing these, at least when I didn't have to play the levels or use theater mode. And Rarity is an artist of sorts. We'll see if that applies to high explosives too

...four chapters from now, anyways. :raritydespair:

891548 It's all in good fun. Funny thing is that when I was done reading what you had I played Halo 3 ODST and actually tried following the chapters in the game. It was interesting. So anyway, you get my point. Nice work so far, and I look forward to reading more of it as it comes out

891573 Well, Happy to provide something that at least interested you. Thank you for the compliments, and I'll be sure to post new chapters as soon as I can!

I have got to say ......... WOW This is a really awesome fic :twilightsmile: I have read all the chapters and think your doing a great job KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP MAN :pinkiehappy:



Oh im guessing that
Dash is Buck,
Spitfire is Dare,
Twilight is Romeo,
Rarity is Mickey
Applejack is Dutch,
Pinkie is Sergeant Johnson I think
And Fluttershy is well the rookie which is pretty accurate :yay:

One thing...... This story needs more bass,Vinyl Scratch is needed :twilightsheepish:

1106527 Thank you! I'll do my best to crank out the next 2 chapters.

I can say that all the characters you've named that have speaking roles are accurate. As for Pinkie...well, we'll just have to wait and see.

and EVERYTHING needs more Scratch.

And now I completely break my original plans and only post this chapter. Sorry fillies and gentlecolts, but AJ's gonna take a bit longer. In the meantime enjoy Fluttershy being a headshot master and gaining a companion!

:ajbemused:

Yes, yes, I'll get it done soon AJ.

Ah at last! Another chapter! I go to read now. :coolphoto:

1139804 lol. I was reading another story when my "Updated Stories" menu raised up a couple numbers. Just got done with a busy marching band rehearsal day, so some reading is definately in order for me. :twilightsmile:

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