Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

8036616 how is it that hard too read?

8534550
I think Fear of the Walking Dead is pretty good, shows how the fall happened, how people just thought it was just some small time strange illness and that the police were just doing their brutality thing before riots start happening which help increase the zombie pool.

Its very...... realistic of a Zombie Apocalypse if you take away our knowledge of what a zombie is or can do. Something many people fail to realize when they watch these shows and movies and claim everyone is being idiots.

Yeah I can see why you wanted to make this, and also I think I saw a Highschool of the Dead reference in there at the school scene.

Just go ahead and find yourself someone who can edit for ya that way people can be better submerged into your writing without being pulled out by spelling errors and/or confusing words that seemingly have no place there

8535782
Would you like to be my editor?

8536174
I wouldn't mind editing for ya, might help me out in the long run with my own stuff.

But never been an editor before so you might want to give me the run down on how things like that work

8536281
Just fix grammer mistakes and spelling errors.
I will be able to send you what i have by thursday ok?

8536364
Alright then, just send it to me via PM and I'll do my best

8538522
Where does it say that?

8538335
Ok but it will be delayed and i will send it to your when i can

8538814
It was when she entered Atlanta, they seem to switch and inter change, especially around the point where you kinda start going between he/she that other people started noticing
8538821
Alright then, I'll be ready and waiting when ya do

8539873
Can you start by editing what i have already?

8540138
I'd need ya to send me information regarding certain scenes and what not. I'll get right on it, just gotta make sure I get all the information I need for the 4 chapters you have up.

8540153
Sure what scenes do you need info on?

8540640
Particularly, the scenes for the last 2 chapters. Mostly cause thats where I got confused when Rick and Lee started showing up out of no where in the story and the he and she hand offs were being made.

8540654
Just change Rick to Twilight and Lee to Vinyl they have no point in this story just accidentally added them while watching walking dead as inspiration

8542031
alright thank you for that, cause really that was kinda confusing. I'll just redownload the files and start up again. I'll ask ya if I need some information or clarity

8542077
Ok send me the finished product when finish and by the way how do you want to to me?

8542298
TO what you? *curious*

8542393
Yes how are you gonna send me the edited chapters?

8542393
What you mean i need them edited how are you gonna send them to me?

8542700
I'll try sending them to you via PM, will get done as soon as possible. Gotta juggle college

8547226
Ok