I wouldn't call this story a "awful garbage fire of a story", but it defiantly needs to be taken down, re-edit and look at again, before posting it back on here. I'm not saying this to be mean but, it is hard to read this story after the first paragraph, to be honest, I stop after reaching the second. With so much error in here, it just too hard to read, to stay focus, or just over all enjoy such a story this could be.
As for the shipping, like Watergod said, just don't do it unless this story has some use for shipping. If you're shipping to try to keep the readers happy or interested then just don't ship at all, it be a terrible idea. Stories that have shipping in them, revolves around that shipping, not the other way round or just having the ship to be a major impact to the story overall.
As a prereader myself, this story need to be second look, there just no other way putting it.
You've got an interesting premise, an intriging story, and I'm curious to see how you diverge from the show.
Mind you I was hoping a little more Fear the Walking dead instead of the walking dead. But still it got me hooked. My only problem being the spelling makes it hard to stay in the story when I have to either A. decipher whats being said at times, or B. need to reread over a passage to understand a specific part.
8534046 That makes sense sense i suck at writing but sense nobody was doing a EQG & TWD fanfic i decided to be the first. Plus i never watched Fear The Walking Dead is it as good as i hear it is
I wouldn't call this story a "awful garbage fire of a story", but it defiantly needs to be taken down, re-edit and look at again, before posting it back on here. I'm not saying this to be mean but, it is hard to read this story after the first paragraph, to be honest, I stop after reaching the second. With so much error in here, it just too hard to read, to stay focus, or just over all enjoy such a story this could be.
As for the shipping, like Watergod said, just don't do it unless this story has some use for shipping. If you're shipping to try to keep the readers happy or interested then just don't ship at all, it be a terrible idea. Stories that have shipping in them, revolves around that shipping, not the other way round or just having the ship to be a major impact to the story overall.
As a prereader myself, this story need to be second look, there just no other way putting it.
Actually I have two editors Trenderhoof was supposed to be the first zombie they wanted Dr. Whooves and I didn't want to loose their help
I saw your blog post can my OC be in your story pls
Yes
7524950 yay Should I send information
Yes
My OC name is Arctic Ace and he is White skin with Purple hair and a purple scarf
7524961 also if I can ask will there be a little romance or love in the story
Thanks he'll probably end up around third or fourth chapter or when I can make room for him
There will be shipping some that have probably never Been thought of
7524968 KK and will be some or little romance in this to because one of the tags is sex tag so just wondering
7524970 if I can ask.. And hope this isn't asking for to much but can my OC be shipped with someone if that's ok with you
Do you need an editor?
I'll edit this for you if you want, cause this is so hard to read...
You've got an interesting premise, an intriging story, and I'm curious to see how you diverge from the show.
Mind you I was hoping a little more Fear the Walking dead instead of the walking dead. But still it got me hooked. My only problem being the spelling makes it hard to stay in the story when I have to either A. decipher whats being said at times, or B. need to reread over a passage to understand a specific part.
other than that awesome
8534046
That makes sense sense i suck at writing but sense nobody was doing a EQG & TWD fanfic i decided to be the first. Plus i never watched Fear The Walking Dead is it as good as i hear it is